Challenge: The Perfect Ten (v2.0)

[BitchSlap]

Must have got the number on the wall...

Fling Master

 

[sellthecookie]

waiting for the day
when trains
will quietly pass by

 

[Liar]

eavesdropping traffic

for collisions,

knowing my bones

won't snap,

yet

 

[The_Fool]

One
recorded
message​

Sorry I missed you
Catch you later

Thinking you screen your calls
You never talk to me

 

[BitchSlap]

Lost
floating order balance fragmentation
expansion rest unity

Intuition

Art

 

[Immobile]

How can the psychic
not suffer
from images
at rest?

 

[Immobile]

The sun kills
and gives life;

gifts to broken hearts.

 

[BitchSlap]

Greatest Gift
Simple Free Pure


Silent Strong Immortal

True
Friendship

 

[Picodiribibi]

This Poem Not Valid in the Southern Hemisphere

.................Around
..........................the
.................ear......drain
.............app....s......and
............dis............down
.............poem.......the
.................the pipe

 

[Angeline]

.................Around
..........................the
.................ear......drain
.............app....s......and
............dis............down
.............poem.......the
.................the pipe

This is excellent. I hope you submit it and don't let it become buried in this thread.

 

[Picodiribibi]

This is excellent. I hope you submit it and don't let it become buried in this thread.

Thank you, it was fun to write. The inspiration came from another shape poem on this thread.

And now, as proof of my newness...How do you submit?

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

Thank you, it was fun to write. The inspiration came from another shape poem on this thread.

And now, as proof of my newness...How do you submit?

It's all laid out in here.


Good luck to you.

(P.S. In you case just substitute "poem" for "story".)

 

[sellthecookie]

falling
at 100
miles per hour.
the velocity
of guilt.

 

[vampiredust]

Her magpie-mouth
steals thoughts
from the bolthole
of my heart

 

[sellthecookie]

waking up
at 7 versus waking
up for good

 

[drown]

perhaps

when you were
not

here

you saw
what was​

 

[Susan Strict]

My love
whipped, abused,
tortured
and used.

Perfect.

 

[Remec]

what comes, goes
and we roll along
merrily
merrily
forever

 

[sellthecookie]

oceans, lakes,
puddles, bathtubs,
shotglasses of rhum,
we drown

 

[vampiredust]

Lake Mead

Lake repopulates dna,
flowers bloom in bone.

 

[Vampiric_Mirage]

Enraptured
Enslaved
Ensorcelled
Engorged
Enticing

I endure against you

Why?...

 

[Bedtime Storyteller]

nursing

swollen, overflowing,
tight
he latches
pulling
suck...suck...suck...swallow

 

[vampiredust]

Homeless

Wasps regurgitated
the paper memories
of my house.

I choked

 

[sophieloves]

Driftwood, gnarled and
mangled, yet rubbed ever so smooth,
Precious.

just wanted to say i thought this was really special





a perfect ten?
if only, if only.
grasp
at stars

 

[sophieloves]

Her magpie-mouth
steals thoughts
from the bolthole
of my heart

ahhhhhhhhhhhhh. deeply original





bolts hold me together
yet make of me
a monster