Challenge: The Perfect Ten (v2.0)

[LeBroz]

.
.

I am bimbo
hear me giggle
while implants
quickly jiggle

.
.

 

[Bedtime Storyteller]

we all want
acceptance
so
why are we
always looking?

 

[vampiredust]

plagiarised faith
protests via televised
executions and popcorn
gore

 

[PandoraGlitters]

No,
.....not nape—

near.
........That vertibrae,

there.
.........May I lick?

You may
note that is where I keep
my shivers.

 

[Tzara]

You may
note that is where I keep
my shivers.

My reading stopped
after your first line.

Is that OK?

 

[tungtied2u]

ten words are too
often more than one
can summon

 

[wildsweetone]

ten words are too
often more than one
can summon

ten words are too often
ten more than is necessary.

 

[LeBroz]

.
.
ten
words say so much
eleven
eke out too little

.
.

 

[PandoraGlitters]

My reading stopped
after your first line.

Is that OK?

Perhaps another use
of enjambment
to discuss

after that lick.

 

[PandoraGlitters]

He said he dreamt
my eyes but of
or through?

 

[PandoraGlitters]

His love burns
citric acid goodness
on my sore throat.

 

[PandoraGlitters]

Prudence
is not putting all
your fish into one
blender.

 

[vampiredust]

6.11.07

A leftover firework.
Its unlit tongue
waits for winter's
spark.

 

[sophieloves]

some crave
the perfect ten -
i find nine a s t r e t c h

 

[Remec]

some crave
the perfect ten -
i find nine a s t r e t c h

Flexibility, like many
a worthwhile thing, comes
with much practice.

 

[sophieloves]

Flexibility, like many
a worthwhile thing, comes
with much practice.

the practical practitioner,
me,
smiles

knowing practice makes
(almost)
perfect

 

[sophieloves]

and then and then and

then

what's left to say...?

 

[sophieloves]

this morning, am i poem
or merely chopped-up prose?

 

[sophieloves]

hush, thoughts, not so loudly
some things best left unheard

 

[sophieloves]

Peter Piper, that pickled-pepper picker
no kisses for him

 

[sophieloves]

only ten
yet still somehow there's room to
squander

wurd

 

[sophieloves]

O

O, O, O, O, O

just that
just

O

 

[Remec]

and then and then and

then

what's left to say...?

"And then along came Jones...."
Isn't that what
comes next?

 

[Remec]

only ten
yet still somehow there's room to
squander

wurd

Goosie Goosie Gander,
wherefore do you squander?
Upstairs,
Downstairs,
Relentlessly.

 

[sophieloves]

referencing the gallows

Goosie Goosie Gander,
wherefore do you squander?
Upstairs,
Downstairs,
Relentlessly.

climb the wooden
stairs to bed -
pull the other
one