greenmountaineer
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Thanks, Mr. T and Mer for your comments. Point taken, Tzara, about the title. I struggled with it. Perhaps my reach exceeded grasp, but taking her husband "in" (as in embracing) I thought was a stronger statement than just taking him back. I've been thinking about forgiveness lately (which I considered as the title but rejected it as too mundane). Is forgiveness merely acceptance and moving on or does it require something more? Whenever I hear someone say "I can forgive, but I can't forget" I think about that question.
You're right, Tzara, about the word order with "empty beautiful." It just took me a while to wrap my head around it.
It was Eliot who said "Good poets borrow, great poets steal..." Lit's not the final resting place for my poems, so if either you or Mer have a better suggestion for the title, have at it. I promise I won't tell.
You're right, Tzara, about the word order with "empty beautiful." It just took me a while to wrap my head around it.
It was Eliot who said "Good poets borrow, great poets steal..." Lit's not the final resting place for my poems, so if either you or Mer have a better suggestion for the title, have at it. I promise I won't tell.
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