I was thinking of writing a story, probably in several parts, where a daughter comes back from uni and has a night in with her mum watching a romantic movie and getting through a bottle of wine. It loosens mum up to get the conversation going to talking about the daughter's increasing size and particularly her bust. There's a little bit of intimacy but the main thrust of the conversation is that the daughter agrees to go out with one of her mother's friends shy sons in return for the mum agreeing to a night out with the daughter.
As far as the daughter is concerned her mum is wasting herself in drab clothing waiting hand and foot on her husband (the daughter's step father) whilst he is down the local social club and out with his mates.
What the daughter does not appreciate is that her mother and this step father are swingers and that outside the home her mum is far from the personality she shows in the family home. She has of course been encouraged and led that way by the step father.
Perhaps it is the 'shy son' of one of her mother's friends who passes on the gossip of swinging to the daughter. How will the daughter get on with the young man? What has she learnt at Uni? Does she look on her mother and her step dad in a different light? How might this story proceed? Any other suggestions for its foundation? Would it generate interest?
I would welcome the thoughts of others please.
As far as the daughter is concerned her mum is wasting herself in drab clothing waiting hand and foot on her husband (the daughter's step father) whilst he is down the local social club and out with his mates.
What the daughter does not appreciate is that her mother and this step father are swingers and that outside the home her mum is far from the personality she shows in the family home. She has of course been encouraged and led that way by the step father.
Perhaps it is the 'shy son' of one of her mother's friends who passes on the gossip of swinging to the daughter. How will the daughter get on with the young man? What has she learnt at Uni? Does she look on her mother and her step dad in a different light? How might this story proceed? Any other suggestions for its foundation? Would it generate interest?
I would welcome the thoughts of others please.