Mother and daughter

HelenUK44

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I was thinking of writing a story, probably in several parts, where a daughter comes back from uni and has a night in with her mum watching a romantic movie and getting through a bottle of wine. It loosens mum up to get the conversation going to talking about the daughter's increasing size and particularly her bust. There's a little bit of intimacy but the main thrust of the conversation is that the daughter agrees to go out with one of her mother's friends shy sons in return for the mum agreeing to a night out with the daughter.

As far as the daughter is concerned her mum is wasting herself in drab clothing waiting hand and foot on her husband (the daughter's step father) whilst he is down the local social club and out with his mates.

What the daughter does not appreciate is that her mother and this step father are swingers and that outside the home her mum is far from the personality she shows in the family home. She has of course been encouraged and led that way by the step father.

Perhaps it is the 'shy son' of one of her mother's friends who passes on the gossip of swinging to the daughter. How will the daughter get on with the young man? What has she learnt at Uni? Does she look on her mother and her step dad in a different light? How might this story proceed? Any other suggestions for its foundation? Would it generate interest?

I would welcome the thoughts of others please.
 
That could be a lot of fun. I kind of like the idea that Daughter and Shy Date just happen to see Mum and Not-Stepdad, in their club finery, at some kind of nightspot. Then, they see Mum making out with her date ... and also another guy she just happens to dance with. Maybe they even see a car in the parking lot with the windows frosted with condensation, rocking back and forth ... and it's Mum's car.

Shy Guy is very turned on by this, and is doing his (not very good) best to seduce Daughter, while she's still disoriented by having to reimagine her mom. So it works. He's an inexperienced, but considerate lover.

How does Daughter feel waking up in Shy Guy's bed the next day? He's so happy, he can hardly contain himself.

-Annie
 
in return for the mum agreeing to a night out with the daughter.
I think the first two posts are spot on. After seeing her mom acting so debaucherous and her surprisingly satisfying evening with the shy guy, she has her night out with mom. Who secretly knows she was spotted at the club the night before. She knows there's nothing to hide anymore and it she's glad of it.

So mom takes her out to another hot nightspot and they both have a good time dancing when they stop to have a drink. Mom looks over at a pair of handsome guys who are checking them out. "Mmm, I'd love to get between those two, wouldn't you?" Mom asks.

At this point the daughter starts asking some pointed questions, and mom tells all. The hotwifing, swinging and all sort of nasty, wonderful goings on. Then those two men come over and mom is very welcoming.

Drinks come over and it's not long before she sees her mother out on the dance floor sandwiched between those two hunks. She gets a little jealous and walks out there and pulls one of them off her and kisses him fiercely.

The evening ends in one big bed with her, her mom and both men. About three AM, she and her mother are enjoying their walk of shame and mom looks over at her. "How would you feel about doing that with your stepdad?"
 
The evening ends in one big bed with her, her mom and both men. About three AM, she and her mother are enjoying their walk of shame and mom looks over at her. "How would you feel about doing that with your stepdad?"
My thought about the ending was Stepdad walking in on the foursome, just as they're all in post-coital bliss.

-Annie
 
My thought about the ending was Stepdad walking in on the foursome, just as they're all in post-coital bliss.

-Annie
Yes, except he's not alone. He's with the hot MILF neighbor, who's dressed a little provocatively like she's been hitting the clubs herself. He motions toward the bed filled with naked cum covered bodies. "See, I told you!" he says with a laugh.
The neighbors eyes go wide and then he drags her out, closing the door. They can hear them both giggling crazily as they head down to the guest room. It's not long before the moans start, which sets mother and daughter sucking on two rapidly inflating cocks for a third go-round.
 
How do we feel about shy guy being inexperienced with sex. Mom thinks he's cute and wanting to make sex better for her daughter decides to help him.
 
After some practice with the mom, she thinks he's ready and so she brings in her daughter and they both go at him. Having two beautiful sexy women on him is just too much for him to handle so he cums quickly. He feels disappointed, but the girls reassure him that it's ok. Mom knew this might happen and so she had step dad waiting this entire time. "Watch and learn from my husband." The mom says as step dad ravages both Mom and step daughter as shy guy watches closely, cock gradually recovering and getting hard for another round.
 
I was thinking of writing a story, probably in several parts, where a daughter comes back from uni and has a night in with her mum watching a romantic movie and getting through a bottle of wine. It loosens mum up to get the conversation going to talking about the daughter's increasing size and particularly her bust. There's a little bit of intimacy but the main thrust of the conversation is that the daughter agrees to go out with one of her mother's friends shy sons in return for the mum agreeing to a night out with the daughter.

As far as the daughter is concerned her mum is wasting herself in drab clothing waiting hand and foot on her husband (the daughter's step father) whilst he is down the local social club and out with his mates.

What the daughter does not appreciate is that her mother and this step father are swingers and that outside the home her mum is far from the personality she shows in the family home. She has of course been encouraged and led that way by the step father.

Perhaps it is the 'shy son' of one of her mother's friends who passes on the gossip of swinging to the daughter. How will the daughter get on with the young man? What has she learnt at Uni? Does she look on her mother and her step dad in a different light? How might this story proceed? Any other suggestions for its foundation? Would it generate interest?

I would welcome the thoughts of others please.
The premise sounds intriguing. But I won't give you any advice on where to take it. You've asked all the important questions. I suggest you just answer them as you're writing it, trying to put yourself in your characters' shoes and seeing how they would act and react to the situation. Let it happen organically. At least, that's the way I write. I know some of the more dedicated and "professional" writers on here work from an outline with a specific endgame in mind.

Either way, best wishes as you write it, and I'll look forward to seeing the results.
 
I think the first two posts are spot on. After seeing her mom acting so debaucherous and her surprisingly satisfying evening with the shy guy, she has her night out with mom. Who secretly knows she was spotted at the club the night before. She knows there's nothing to hide anymore and it she's glad of it.

So mom takes her out to another hot nightspot and they both have a good time dancing when they stop to have a drink. Mom looks over at a pair of handsome guys who are checking them out. "Mmm, I'd love to get between those two, wouldn't you?" Mom asks.

At this point the daughter starts asking some pointed questions, and mom tells all. The hotwifing, swinging and all sort of nasty, wonderful goings on. Then those two men come over and mom is very welcoming.

Drinks come over and it's not long before she sees her mother out on the dance floor sandwiched between those two hunks. She gets a little jealous and walks out there and pulls one of them off her and kisses him fiercely.

The evening ends in one big bed with her, her mom and both men. About three AM, she and her mother are enjoying their walk of shame and mom looks over at her. "How would you feel about doing that with your stepdad?"
The night of seeing mom at club who's not dad could end up in a limo the guy mom was with had ordered... to not tell on her the mom allows dau and the shy boy to ride in limo too... drinks flowing and everyone getting a looser until girls are making out with their dates in limo in front of each other
 
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