pic-a-thon II

[annaswirls]

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[Angeline]

Melody in sea minor.


Question - is the script too hard to read?

C'est magnifique! Submit. (the uh poem)

 

[Guest]

C'est magnifique! Submit. (the uh poem)

Merci mille fois! But I need to get rid of the apostrophe and make it a bit clearer, je pense.

Maybe that should read "the ugh poem" .

 

[Kundalinguini]

Melody in Sea Minor

I almost hesitate to say it, but I just can't help myself.

Actually, if you only play the black keys, you're not playing a minor, you're playing a pentatonic.

 

[Guest]

Re: Melody in Sea Minor

I almost hesitate to say it, but I just can't help myself.

Actually, if you only play the black keys, you're not playing a minor, you're playing a pentatonic.

Poetic licence?


What if I changed "only" to "mostly"?

 

[Kundalinguini]

Re: Re: Melody in Sea Minor

Poetic licence?


What if I changed "only" to "mostly"?

Sure... poetic license is always an option.

How 'bout you "linger on the black notes"?

That implies more what you are trying to say, while maintaining enough vagueness to be musically accurate.



edited to say: Or you could just tell me "Hey, fuck off, it's my poem."

 

[Guest]

I'd never say fuck off to a helpful critic. I'm re-jigging it as I write.

Thank you for pointing out my gaffe before the dye was cast.

 

[SeattleRain]

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[Guest]

That's lovely SR. The Dogwood trees are just beautiful right now.

My only suggestion is - make the script just a little larger.

 

[annaswirls]

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[SeattleRain]

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[denis hale]

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I love this thread,

and I believe it will go on forever.

 

[WickedEve]

Denis, it's too tiny.

 

[denis hale]

Yes I

have been told that many times!


I suck at this!
I'm gonna put just the pic up and shitcan the words.

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Yes I

have been told that many times!

Size doesn't matter, dear denis.


(yeah, right! lol)


I'm talking about your illustration, of course...

 

[denis hale]

Oh That!

I've forgotten all about that!

I'm mesmerized by your feet, now. I can't seem to get to anything else. A poem about your feet is demanding to be written! What can I do?

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Oh That!

I've forgotten all about that!

I'm mesmerized by your feet, now. I can't seem to get to anything else. A poem about your feet is demanding to be written! What can I do?

You know, Maria was going on about feet recently. What's with feet? And if I were to let you see the uncropped version of this AV, then you'd be wanting to write about naked ass, long legs, and... well, I'm too shy to say what else.

 

[Liar]

Re: Oh That!

I've forgotten all about that!

I'm mesmerized by your feet, now. I can't seem to get to anything else. A poem about your feet is demanding to be written! What can I do?

Write it. Duh.

 

[air2o]

here is photo place?

the buttons had voice
some shouted back
Yes and No
we all arrived at one floor
or another like waffles
on festive jet fuel

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Thank you for the great start of the day.

 

[Angeline]

Re: here is photo place?

the buttons had voice
some shouted back
Yes and No
we all arrived at one floor
or another like waffles
on festive jet fuel

Oh I just saw this--it's wonderful.

 

[Angeline]

Quietude

 

[Angeline]

Memory

Scott Street
Hollywood, Florida

 

[annaswirls]

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