Types of male lover

[TheOtherTeacher]

I can't find a better forum to post, so I'll ask this here.

I want the lovers in my new (incest) story to each have a different style of making love. And I need more suggestions!

Daddy has a decent cock and is gruff in bed. He isn't selfish, but he's focused on the act of fucking.

Adam is a considerate lover and makes sure his partner finishes. However he sometimes cums too early. (But he's happy to please her while waiting for round 2)

Brian is in love with someone else, and makes love best when he's not looking at her face and can imagine someone else. Enjoys using his hands.

Edward is young and constantly horny. He fucks energetically but doesn't go down on her. Cock is smallest of the characters.

Since I now need to change Deborah into David (see my other post) I need another (male) lover style. Please suggest!

 

[MrPixel]

Considerate and loving, medium-plus in endowment, cuddles after her climax, expert in delaying his own satisfaction, not afraid of cunni but prefers coitus, but has no qualms about moving on to his next "conquest", who is likely already in the bed with them. Encourages girl-girl. (I write poly situations.)

 

[TheWritingGroup]

You could do the opposite of Edward, an older guy. He either needs to take Viagra or the equivalent, or he'll have a relatively soft erection that can last no more than 10 minutes. As a result, he likes to give the ladies head and/or finger them to orgasm before penetration/coitus, because he knows that trying to fuck for a long time is a recipe for a limp dick. With a woman he's emotionally close to and trusts, he might ask for more blow jobs just because he can come even if he isn't hard. Maybe he's open to using toys, which none of your other guys seem to be, and will vibrate his lovers after he's post-erection.

-Annie

 

[onehitwanda]

Don't forget 30-Second-Sean, the perpetual premature ejaculator.

 

[lovecraft68]

Don't forget 30-Second-Sean, the perpetual premature ejaculator.

He's a stud compared to two pump Tommy, second hand Stan...

Okay, now I have that '50 ways to leave your lover' going through my mind and there has to be a minute man version that can be written.

50 seconds until you're done with your lover.

 

[SimonDoom]

I think these kinds of questions are best answered by first asking what the point of your story is. What are trying to say? Where will it end up? What's the point? Why do you WANT to have characters that reflect a variety of male lover styles? If you think those things through carefully it may answer your question more meaningfully than by trying to canvass opinion here about the variety of male love-style types. You're just going to get lots of bias and personal opinion, which may or may not have anything to do with what you are trying to accomplish.

 

[Anexpat19]

you could have an eager lover that loves going down on her, wants her sitting on his face and gets off on getting her off

 

[StillStunned]

Well, if David started out as Deborah, he'll probably want to spend ages kissing, then he'll just lie there, and afterwards want to cuddle, or possibly even cry. Maybe he'll heave a disappointed sigh or two.

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

I think these kinds of questions are best answered by first asking what the point of your story is. What are trying to say? Where will it end up? What's the point? Why do you WANT to have characters that reflect a variety of male lover styles? If you think those things through carefully it may answer your question more meaningfully than by trying to canvass opinion here about the variety of male love-style types. You're just going to get lots of bias and personal opinion, which may or may not have anything to do with what you are trying to accomplish.

It's a basic incest story. Girl turns 18 and learns that basically everyone in their family is having sex with everyone else.

For the first few nights, she shares her bed with a different family member.

I want to focus on their love-making styles as a way to tell the brothers apart, since they obviously have some familiar facial features.

I want my main character (and my audience) to like each brother, so I'm hesitant to put in two-pumps Peter or similar.

 

[SimonDoom]

It's a basic incest story. Girl turns 18 and learns that basically everyone in their family is having sex with everyone else.

For the first few nights, she shares her bed with a different family member.

I want to focus on their love-making styles as a way to tell the brothers apart, since they obviously have some familiar facial features.

I want my main character (and my audience) to like each brother, so I'm hesitant to put in two-pumps Peter or similar.

It's an interesting concept, but the concept needs refinement before you can think about the characters.

You say "everyone in their family is having sex with everyone else." What? Does that mean all these different brothers are having sex with each other? That makes no sense. Even if you set it up that way, it would be inconsistent with the idea that every brother represents a different lovemaking style.

Where are you GOING with this? Where does it end up? What does she learn or decide after the experiences? That has a big part in deciding how she gets there. Does she end up with one brother as the "right" lover? What are you trying to get at?

My general thought is that you should narrow down the number of brothers (combined with dad) to the smallest number needed to get your story across. Don't get wedded to the idea you need a certain number of brothers. It might be enough to have dad plus two brothers. If you are having trouble figuring out what the "extra" brother's lovemaking style is, that might be a sign you don't need that extra brother. Get rid of him. "Kill your darlings" is always a good idea for story writing. There's a natural tendency to overcomplicate things. We all tend to want to do that.

My recommendation would be to have Dad + 2 brothers, or Dad + 3 brothers, but no more than that. It will be too much.

Here's a concept: one brother, as a lover, represents the head/superego, one represents the heart/ego, and one represents the id/body. The body brother is wholly physical, animal. One is highly intellectual and perhaps kinky, but there's something cold in his lovemaking style. One is considerate and romantic, but he lacks the raw physical appeal of the body brother. A little like the Brothers Karamazov. Dad could be irresponsible and removed and amoral, like the father Fyodor.

Do you want her to end up with one brother, or to move beyond them to find somebody who embodies the good qualities of each?

 

[MillieDynamite]

Winkin, Blinkin, and Nod are the only types of male lovers. Actually, I have no knowledge of male lovers in real life.

 

[ElectricBlue]

Here's a concept: one brother, as a lover, represents the head/superego, one represents the heart/ego, and one represents the id/body. The body brother is wholly physical, animal. One is highly intellectual and perhaps kinky, but there's something cold in his lovemaking style. One is considerate and romantic, but he lacks the raw physical appeal of the body brother. A little like the Brothers Karamazov. Dad could be irresponsible and removed and amoral, like the father Fyodor.

I have a feeling this might all be wasted. I reckon the OP just wants a fuck-fest, not Russian Sisters...

 

[SimonDoom]

I have a feeling this might all be wasted. I reckon the OP just wants a fuck-fest, not Russian Sisters...

Could be. And "fuck fest" is a fine goal. But there are well-conceived fuck fests and bad ones.

I think this is an issue that arises with many, mostly new, erotic writers. They're brimming with erotic enthusiasm. They conceive of a character and want to have that character jump through as many kinky hoops as possible. And they don't think it through and realize that the erotic effect can perhaps be achieved not by maximizing the number of hoops but by having fewer, better-conceived, and more satisfying hoops.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

Another possibility would be a selfish guy, who insists the woman please him because he's the guy, and just bestowing his favor on her should be enough compensation.

I'm sure none of us have ever met Selfish Guy in his many incarnations, of course.

-Annie

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

You say "everyone in their family is having sex with everyone else." What? Does that mean all these different brothers are having sex with each other?

My general thought is that you should narrow down the number of brothers (combined with dad) to the smallest number needed to get your story across. If you are having trouble figuring out what the "extra" brother's lovemaking style is, that might be a sign you don't need that extra brother.

My recommendation would be to have Dad + 2 brothers, or Dad + 3 brothers, but no more than that. It will be too much.

Here's a concept: one brother, as a lover, represents the head/superego, one represents the heart/ego, and one represents the id/body.

I was trying to summarise when previous writing "everyone is having sex with everyone".

What I meant was - it's set primarily in a rural, traditional farm atmosphere (consider the Amish) and our main character turns 18, learning that every female member of the family has sex with the male members, with the aim to get pregnant. (Ladies also have same-sex interactions for personal enjoyment). Even at the start of the story, both her mum and one of her sisters are pregnant, and another gave birth 5 months ago.

Later story development shows this is actually a post-apocalypse society and that family love was the only option for repopulating the earth after an unknown event.

It will also reveal that the 'first generation' were brother and sister called Adamaris and Evelyn, and therefore giving the reader the possibility that this was our human past rather than our future.
Other themes include the importance of birth order in a family (her first time is with her father, then each brother in birth order each following day).

Since each night the men rotate which woman's room to share, I was aiming to have a balance of male and female, so the main character is never lonely in her bed.

At the moment, I mistakenly have 4 males and 6 females. Hence the need to change one sister to a brother, and create a new 'bedroom style' for him.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

Why do you need to change anything? Four men can easily keep six women pregnant. One man could do that. Just give two women per night a chance to do lesbian stuff (or nothing, some people don't fuck every night).

-Annie

 

[MrPixel]

Why do you need to change anything? Four men can easily keep six women pregnant. One man could do that. Just give two women per night a chance to do lesbian stuff (or nothing, some people don't fuck every night).

This is what I do with my current series about a polycule that has organically grown into three men and six women.

 

[StillStunned]

some people don't fuck every night

Hi, it looks like you're new to Literotica! Would you like some help?

 

[TheWritingGroup]

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I hear rumors that some people also fuck at times other than night. Or in numbers not exactly equal to 2.

Those fit Literotica pretty well.

-Annie

 

[SimonDoom]

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Next thing you know, he's going to say something silly like sons don't all have ten-inch dicks. We'll just have to give him the side eye and say, "You're not from around here, are you, kid?"

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

Next thing you know, he's going to say something silly like sons don't all have ten-inch dicks. We'll just have to give him the side eye and say, "You're not from around here, are you, kid?"

One of them only has a seven inch dick, and he's the shame of the family

 

[SimonDoom]

One of them only has a seven inch dick, and he's the shame of the family

See? You're getting the hang of it. Soon you'll be dispensing advice, not asking for it.

 

[TheOtherTeacher]

How about a reluctant brother? He's not ready to break the incest taboo and asks my main character to lie and say they have done the dirty. He still sees her as too much of a friend. BUT when they eventually do the horizontal tango, he's got a really big cock?

What do you think?

 

[ElectricBlue]

He still sees her as too much of a friend. BUT when they eventually do the horizontal tango, he's got a really big cock?

What do you think?

Challenge yourself. Write him with a small cock, but he knows how to use it.

Seems to me you're compiling a list of cliches, and wanting to write by committee. I don't think that ever works, coz you're trying to please everyone, which ends up pleasing no-one.

Have you actually written anything yet? You shouldn't need us for ideas.

 

[Hypnobitch01]

Super submissive maybe? Just so eager to please her in any way he can