A potential Loving Wife story...

[dirk2024]

I am already working on a story for Loving Wives and don't need another one. So if this is worth someone elses time, go for it.






"I'm pregnant."

Shocked, I look at my wife. She sits there calmly, a stoic look upon her face. Jumbled thoughts bounce through my head, but they all boil down to one.

I'm sterile.

We've been married for fifteen years. We began trying to get pregnant on year five. After two years with no success, we both got tested. She was a healthy woman, capable of getting pregnant with eggs aplenty. I was a healthy man, however one who didn't have one sperm cell in my ejaculate. I tested several more times in the following months, all to no avail. In the following years, I secretly tested my sperm count every year, hoping for a miracle that never came. This was my last year taking the test as I couldn't take the disappointment anymore.

Initially, we discussed both fostering and adoption, yet could never come to a conclusion on either option. So here we are, fifteen years later with no children. Until now. She was going to have a baby.

It just wasn't going to be mine.



Personally, I like this beginning. But I don't have it in me to finish it. So I'm setting it free.

 

[sirhugs]

a kind and generous donation. I very much enjoyed this opening and wish that I had the time sand energy to continue it. I hope that somebody does.

 

[CalBishForNow]

Oh, wow. I'd love to read it. I'd love to write it if I didn't already have a long file of ideas. (Maybe in a few months? I'm starting to think one or more of the stories in my queue might fizzle out.) But I absolutely would not love dealing with the comments and votes on it.

A BTB version of this story is logical but so predictable it's pointless. More predictable than "cheerleader and star quarterback fuck", more predictable than "pizza delivery man with extra sausage", more predictable than "strip poker leads to orgy." (Wow, this site has warped my mind.) If I felt the need to get a high score in LW just to prove it's possible, a BTB version of this story would be a good choice.

But is another version of it possible? RAAC, or no reconciliation at all, just rolling with it? A version where the woman is objectively blameless? (Off the top of my head, I'm going to say no; even if she was raped or did IVF, there's still some deception involved between then and when a pregnancy test comes back positive. Maybe if someone puts more thought into it...) A version where the betrayal is minimized, and/or they acknowledge it and find it's easier to live with than they expected?

More to the point, how good/successful could it be in LW? (I'm sure it could be successful in Fetish, but that's not the point.) Do I have the skill to write a version of this that gets the red H in LW? (No. Does anyone?)

 

[MikeXIrons]

How can she be objectively blameless? Hmmm.

Maybe she has no idea how it happened.

Miracle birth?

Or, she was taken advantage of by the dentist/doctor while she was under anesthesia.

Or a drunken night (her friend’s bachelorette party?) she doesn’t remember? Maybe she was ruphied?

Or maybe he confided in one of his friends that he was ashamed that he couldn’t do the deed. The friend encouraged him to keep trying, and, secretly set up a scenario where he posed as his impotent friend to help him save face.

Or some other mistaken identity scenario?

Hypnosis and dual personality are kinda lame.

Sleepwalking on their recent camping trip / ski trip with friends?

 

[dirk2024]

I don't know. When I thought about this, blameless, she isn't.

"I'm pregnant."

Shocked, I look at my wife. She sits there calmly, a stoic look upon her face.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Another option is that she is carrying someone elses child via in-vitro as a serogate mom. They discussed it in the past but he was unsure, so she shelved the idea. Finally she thinks, "it's my body" and pulls the trigger.
This way the story can go into all the wonderful changes her body goes through, including her sex drive being dialed up to eleven, for six months. And then the boobs swell and we have the lactation kink.

Maybe don't let the in-vitro cat out of the bag until the end? Just as a fun twist?

Then at the end, after the child is weaned, she finds herself pregnant, due to all the sex she and her husband have been having. Mr. Low-sperm-count finally made it happen.