WCSGarland
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It's time for me to start brain-storming for the 4th part of my Untethered Hearts series.
Synopsis of the series so far is:
A wife - Katrina, about 47yo - is bored with her marriage and through a personal adult ad finds a woman to seduce her husband so that she has a reason to give her family and friends for divorcing hubby. The ad is answered by - Jessa - single, precocious, hypersexual, slightly narcissistic yuppy approximately 15 years her junior who agrees to do the job for Katrina. Jessa first seduces Katrina, then tries to seduce - Dale, about 49yo - the husband, who resists her attempts to seduce him as long as he can. When Jessa is finally successful seducing Dale, she sends the signal to Katrina to 'catch them' after the fact. Katrina has a change of heart and tells Jessa they will not be splitting up and they will no longer be seeing Jessa, breaking Jessa's heart in the process. Katrina, upon returning home with Dale, confesses what she contrived and the two of them try to heal their marriage. They try for a while until Dale realizes that Katrina is still smitten with Jessa, and Dale secretly places an ad to reconnect with Jessa and these portions of the series ends with Dale surprising Katrina with meeting Jessa in the same place she initially met Jessa.
Part 1 was told from the POV of Jessa.
Part 2 was told from the POV of Katrina.
Part 3 was told from the POV of Dale.
I have a few ideas already for the fourth part. Ultimately, part four is what happens after they reconnect. It will be how they define their relationship going forward. Jessa desires both husband and wife. Dale and Katrina both desire Jessa, but the three of them have to either come to terms with being a menage-a-trois or they have to decide to remain an entirely platonic friendly relationship, or perhaps even the three will take turns pairing off.
I have to decide what POV to use for this next portion of the series. I'm trying to decide whether to round robin like I did with the previous portion, or head hop the entire portion, or tell entirely from 3rd person.
Any ideas?
Synopsis of the series so far is:
A wife - Katrina, about 47yo - is bored with her marriage and through a personal adult ad finds a woman to seduce her husband so that she has a reason to give her family and friends for divorcing hubby. The ad is answered by - Jessa - single, precocious, hypersexual, slightly narcissistic yuppy approximately 15 years her junior who agrees to do the job for Katrina. Jessa first seduces Katrina, then tries to seduce - Dale, about 49yo - the husband, who resists her attempts to seduce him as long as he can. When Jessa is finally successful seducing Dale, she sends the signal to Katrina to 'catch them' after the fact. Katrina has a change of heart and tells Jessa they will not be splitting up and they will no longer be seeing Jessa, breaking Jessa's heart in the process. Katrina, upon returning home with Dale, confesses what she contrived and the two of them try to heal their marriage. They try for a while until Dale realizes that Katrina is still smitten with Jessa, and Dale secretly places an ad to reconnect with Jessa and these portions of the series ends with Dale surprising Katrina with meeting Jessa in the same place she initially met Jessa.
Part 1 was told from the POV of Jessa.
Part 2 was told from the POV of Katrina.
Part 3 was told from the POV of Dale.
I have a few ideas already for the fourth part. Ultimately, part four is what happens after they reconnect. It will be how they define their relationship going forward. Jessa desires both husband and wife. Dale and Katrina both desire Jessa, but the three of them have to either come to terms with being a menage-a-trois or they have to decide to remain an entirely platonic friendly relationship, or perhaps even the three will take turns pairing off.
I have to decide what POV to use for this next portion of the series. I'm trying to decide whether to round robin like I did with the previous portion, or head hop the entire portion, or tell entirely from 3rd person.
Any ideas?