TheOtherTeacher
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I have a concept that I want to turn into a full story.
The beginning is simple. People on a plane. The plane seems to be crashing. Everyone is about to die.
Suddenly, the plane stops mid-air. Magic sci-fi door appears and sci-fi people walk out.
The passengers are offered a choice. Go to the future and basically become breeders (both men and women) or die on the plane.
In the future, they need more generic diversity, especially from men. All the future men died off so they have to go back in time to get new men. And they take people who are recorded as having died (plane crashes, going missing etc) to not affect timelines.
That's my concept.
Now I need help to make it a story.
Characters - I'll do POV chapters from both a man and a woman, 100%
Maybe there are 2 male PoV characters? One with better generics? So he is treated like a celebrity, while the other is treated as a walking sperm bank?
How is the woman character treated? Like a cow on a farm? Or is she treated well? Who fucks her? Is it humans from the past like her? Are there a few surviving future men? Future lesbians? (Don't see how the last one fits with the breeders theme, but everyone loves a good lesbian or two!)
(At one point in my head I had a third viewpoint of a girl who is taken, but generically unable to have children, so they turn her into a futani or whatever it's called. But I think this might be too much for one story)
If going to the future is the beginning of the story, and experiencing the world (fucking many times) is the middle... What's the end?
Thanks for any ideas and suggestions you have!
The beginning is simple. People on a plane. The plane seems to be crashing. Everyone is about to die.
Suddenly, the plane stops mid-air. Magic sci-fi door appears and sci-fi people walk out.
The passengers are offered a choice. Go to the future and basically become breeders (both men and women) or die on the plane.
In the future, they need more generic diversity, especially from men. All the future men died off so they have to go back in time to get new men. And they take people who are recorded as having died (plane crashes, going missing etc) to not affect timelines.
That's my concept.
Now I need help to make it a story.
Characters - I'll do POV chapters from both a man and a woman, 100%
Maybe there are 2 male PoV characters? One with better generics? So he is treated like a celebrity, while the other is treated as a walking sperm bank?
How is the woman character treated? Like a cow on a farm? Or is she treated well? Who fucks her? Is it humans from the past like her? Are there a few surviving future men? Future lesbians? (Don't see how the last one fits with the breeders theme, but everyone loves a good lesbian or two!)
(At one point in my head I had a third viewpoint of a girl who is taken, but generically unable to have children, so they turn her into a futani or whatever it's called. But I think this might be too much for one story)
If going to the future is the beginning of the story, and experiencing the world (fucking many times) is the middle... What's the end?
Thanks for any ideas and suggestions you have!