Grandpa, wake up!

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feels really odd not writing. Editing might count, I suppose, but then I'd have to be doing that.

I guess I feel a bit like a sailor in the sea... ideas, ideas, everywhere and not a drop to drink.

...so I started Grandpa wake Up ch 4... though I will not post that one unless I post a non-incest tale after GWU3... I know there is no logical reason for this rule, but I need rules to live. Otherwise, I fall in the pit...

 

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first proofread/edit of GWU3 done...

 

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GWU3 is off for a beta read...

GWU4 "Beatrice joins in Sally's adventures" is 1000 words in...

 

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Chapter 3 has been submitted

 

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Chapter 3 is Live!

Hope you enjoy.

 

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Having drafted my Christmas story, my attention goes back to the fourth installment of this saga.

On the first day of this chapter, we add sally's nemisis, Beatrice to the fun.

Just not sure where to go for days two and three. At some point, want to further add Esther Primm, a shy classmate, but is that day two or day three? What happens to Beatrice at that point?

 

[PattieD]

Is he susceptible to "morning wood"?

 

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Is he susceptible to "morning wood"?

Grandpa is a horny old guy...check out the first three installments, if that sort of thing interests you. They are long stories, with lots of character development, but also detailed sex scenes.

 

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hhmmm... what about some Grandpa/Sally/Beatrice bdsm for morning two, then Esther joins day three?

 

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in spite of the absence of suggestions, I have launched into day two... or day eleven in total.

 

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Oops.. I got Sally and Beatrice to the swimming hole, nude of course. Do I have it:
descend into lesbian sex,
have Grandpa peeping at them, or
maybe a young man (or two) from Church?

or keep the focus on Grandpa's bedroom?

 

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Days one and two of GWU 4 are drafted.

Have ideas for day three, but room to grow.

Also pretty sure that there will be a chapter 5, the final chapter. Have the basic outline, but lots of room there to consider suggestions.

 

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Chapter 4 is finally complete.

Now I need a proofreader for about 20,000 words.

Anybody up for a sneak peek at Sally's latest adventures?

 

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Chapter 4 is submitted. I will post again once it is up.

I am 500 words into Chapter 5, the final chapter.

 

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Chapter 4 is posted!

https://literotica.com/s/grandpa-wake-up-ch-04

First vote was a 2. No comment, so don't know what displeased that voter/reader. I assume that this is a different reader than the person who favourited it (but also did not comment).

Oh Well, I have stared chapter 5, which I plan as the final chapter.

 

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The final draft of chapter 5, the final chapter, is finally done. Editing might take a while, but hopefully in the meantime, I gave mental space and writing time to translate a new idea into my next story. Just not sure what...
I know it won't be Loving Wives
and still no tentacle monsters need apply.

 

[Zionisacat]

But do the long haired freaky people need to sharpen up their resume?

 

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But do the long haired freaky people need to sharpen up their resume?

they just need to tuck it under their hat. It helps if they wear a hat, even if that is all that they wear.

 

[Hypoxia]

Mom and Dad are increasingly annoyed that Grandpa doesn't get up for meals. Sally is even more annoyed that her parents send her up to try to wake him up, and nothing seems to work- if she shouts, the parents (and her siblings?) complain. If she shakes him, he gets grumpy...

See James Thurber's THE NIGHT THE BED FELL ON GRANDPA. For LIT, was Sally with him then?

 

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See James Thurber's THE NIGHT THE BED FELL ON GRANDPA. For LIT, was Sally with him then?

that would be another story...

 

[Hypoxia]

that would be another story...

But without giant talking rabbits, the bane of erotica.

Anyway, Gramps is in his attic bedroom screwing a couple of great-nieces and their BFFs when a strong earthquake hits the region and collapses the house and his oversized bed. All the fuckers are trapped in the debris but saved by the strong roof-support system. Nothing to do but suck-n-fuck till rescuers arrive with fresh water and towels and more wine. Wake up, Gramps! We've got tawny port now!

 

[Carnevil9]

But without giant talking rabbits, the bane of erotica.

Anyway, Gramps is in his attic bedroom screwing a couple of great-nieces and their BFFs when a strong earthquake hits the region and collapses the house and his oversized bed. All the fuckers are trapped in the debris but saved by the strong roof-support system. Nothing to do but suck-n-fuck till rescuers arrive with fresh water and towels and more wine. Wake up, Gramps! We've got tawny port now!

Earthquakes and collapsing houses always make me think of Heinlein's "And He Built A Crooked House." Now THERE is a story that could use a Literotica make-over!

 

[Hypoxia]

Earthquakes and collapsing houses always make me think of Heinlein's "And He Built A Crooked House." Now THERE is a story that could use a Literotica make-over!

Kage Baker wrote of that neighborhood in a couple of her COMPANY books. And when Bob was wed to a practicing witch, the Heinleins lived nearby and threw sex parties. The origin of JPL is linked there. So yeah, imagine the Crooked House with a separate orgy in every n-dimensional room. Fall out a window and land in a busy bed. Eventually, one ends up fucking themself. Oy.

 

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Chapter 5, the Final Chapter, has been submitted.

Hopefully this unblocks me to actually finish a fresh idea.

 

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The Final chapter is now available for anybody who has stuck with Sally this long!

Sorry for the wait.

Hopefully with this complete, we can all move on to other ideas.