Help with Lisa - Ladies can u help?

bob_martin4125

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Ello,

Bit of a wierd one this.........I'm into writing stories but with input from ladies. They tell me their most erotic fantasies and I write a story around it. My first story on Lit is under 'groups' and its called 'Lucy and the City of Sin'

http://www.literotica.com/stories/s...y.php?id=142621

I am looking for someone to help me finnish the story below and also for ladies to help me write some more stories around their fanatasies or real life experiences.

So please let me have your ideas on the story below. I would lie another 'letter' from 'Lisa' if possible. Unfortunately the real 'Lisa' has gone a bit shy on me now and I haven't been able to finnish the story. So your help would be grealtly appreciated!!

Hope to hear from you

Bob

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Yet to be completed.


So after the episode with Lucy I laid low a bit. I kept in touch with Lucy but she was flying all over Europe on business so it was hard to organise another meeting. So I continued to visit the Literoctica Bulletin Boards and the Literoctica chat rooms. The chat room is a very hard place to meet a like-minded woman. You sense that women in the chatroom get simply bombarded with PM’s as soon as they enter. I always make sure I check out profiles before I even attempt a PM as perhaps 50% of women in the Lit Chatroom aren’t interested in talking to men anyway.

So one evening I was plugging away when I came across Lisa. She was English, about 23 and a student. She said in her profile that she was into hard core sex and nothing shocked her. So I asked her if she fancied seeing my first ever unpublished story ‘Lucy and the City of Sin’. She replied saying that yes she was interested. I told her that it came with a bit of a health warning and the story was very explicit but she said that was fine. So I emailed the story to her and few days later I got the following reply.


OH GOD……….

That was SO sexy. I've been horny all day but I’ve been teasing myself, reading as much sexy stuff as I can, masturbating with my fingers, or my vibe, or my dildo (a rabbit, just like the story!) but never letting ,myself cum.

When I read your story, I didn’t mean to cum. I had the rabbit in my cunt with the little balls vibrating round, and the other bit a little way up my ass. I was just idly flicking my clitty, feeling the wetness, feeling my nipples push against my lacy nighty (its in a 50’s style - you seem to like that? Me too, it's all I wear, fifties clothing. The nighty I have used to be my mothers - kinky bitch - it's really short, blue lace, not see through, but VERY suggestive. The bra cups are sewn in that 50’s style that makes the breasts look pointy) anyway. As I got deeper into your story, imagining you and Lucy wandering round the sex museum, I could feel the juices rising up. My cunt was spasming like mad, desperate for relief. I could imagine that sexy bitch Lucy, her eyes all wide at all the stuff in the museum...

The thought of watching porno with a guy telling me what to do... WOW... believe me, I know what its like to have a boring sex life, I often long to have an affair but can’t bring myself to do it... the woman being double fucked as Lucy gulped down your cum while she came all over your fingers...mmmm, I felt so good...too good

I thought I’d better slow down, but when you started buying sex toys, I just knew I’d cum. Lucy blindfolded, sucking some strangers cock, a dildo in her cunt and ass, just like mine, while a woman sucks you off, and people fucking on stage... I just pictured it, my cunt swelled up, my nipples pushed hard on my nighty...

But it was the final scene, the fucking machine... how often have i fantasized about that? I love the idea of being fucked by a machine. Lucy, wet and dripping, her sexy body being slowly fucked, then harder and harder until she cums... i could imagine her groan, the machine noises, the noise of her wet cunt, her screams and panting... it was to this image that I came, and I came so hard...

First I felt my stomach start to churn a little, then my asshole started throbbing. I shifted a little on the dildo, and started the vibe a little higher. My groans were loud and hard. I was panting, short of breath, my ass full, my cunt full... my cunt started throbbing hard, so hard. My clit was rock solid, the vibe pushing it, demanding my orgasm. I had a final little flash of Lucy, her legs splayed on the chair, her hot tight gash being fucked hard, and I went over the edge. I screamed, gasped, convulsions spreading over my body. My clit throbbed so hard, and my cunt spasming along with my asshole. I started to gush, really spurting, this only happens occasionally and when it does, its goo, four or five times, a rush of hot sweet cum rushed from my body, seeping down my thighs and to my asshole. Just when I thought it was over, I re-read the part about you turning the machine up to full, and another two spurts shot out, soaking the bed, my nighty, my legs. Finally with a few final spasms, I collapsed on the bed. My body was throbbing, so tired, but SO happy...

God your story was so good, I hope it’s true. Lucy sounds like such a sexy bitch, and you sound sexy too, always seem relaxed in control, which is such a turn on. All the details so great, so sexy.

Like I say I know what a boring sex life is like. I’m 23, been with my boyfriend 4 years. I’m his first, but I'd had a few boyfriends and girlfriends before him. I need it constantly, about an hour after coming, I start feeling horny again. i love my boyfriend so much, and would never hurt him, but I love sex too. When we fuck its great, but he doesn’t like anal, or group, and I want all these things. Guess I just have to stick to Internet to live out my fantasies.

If you want to hear any stories from me, just let me know.

Hope to hear from ya, thanks so much for giving me a great (GREAT!!!) orgasm

Lisa x x x

This was perhaps one of the horniest emails I had ever received. A total turn on. I had to go and have a good wank once I read this through a couple of times. Picturing Lisa cum as she read my story, now that was a horny picture in the mind.

I send Lisa a ‘thanks’ and expressed how totally horny her email was. I asked if we could meet on MSN as it was a bit more private than meeting in a chatroom. She replied as follows:


Hiya,

I’m not in the mood for chat today, but thought I'd thank you for replying and tell about my day.

Had to get a train all the way from Leicester to Glasgow, it was pretty hot today and the train was full so it wasn’t too nice. I didn’t have any books or papers with me to read, so I did what I normally do when I’m bored, which is to make up fantasies.

I thought about a girl, 18 or 19, a virgin, going to get her nipples pierced. The woman piercer wants her straight away, and is thrilled to see her with her tits out. The piercer gets out an ice cube and numbs the girls pointy little nipples, then gently and slowly pushes the needle through each one. She gives her a chain to link them up together. Then she starts trying to persuade her to get her clit done. The girl is reluctant, but the piercer is insistent, to the point of forcing her. She says she must show her something. She takes her down to her flat under the shop, where she has a series of sex contraptions, machines, whips, a bed with handcuffs attached and so on. She spanks the girl hard on the ass, before tying her to the bed. The girl is scared and reluctant, but also excited. The piercer threads up her needle and proceeds to lick the girl out, tasting the sweet juice from her virgin pussy.

Without much warning, she threads the needle through the girls clit hood. the girl gasps, but, when the piercer slides the ring into her clit hood and rubs it gently over her clit, she feels her puss tightening to an orgasm. The piercer gently rubs her tits and pussy as the orgasm subsides, fondling the girl tenderly. She adds a chain to the clit ring, linking it up to the girls breasts.

She asks the girl to look in the mirror, asks if she likes what she sees. The girl nods, transfixed by her linked up tits and clit. The piercer comes up behind her with a vibe, pressing it on her newly pierced clit as they gaze in the mirror together. All the while, she whispers to her, asking if she likes to see herself being masturbated. Soon the girl is on the verge of another orgasm. The piercer fondles the girls tits with one hand, while holding the vibe on the other. Then the girl gets a surprise. She feels something working on her ass. She realises the piercer must have a strap on. It’s well lubed, and though her ass is virgin, it eventually slips in. The pain is exquisite, with the vibe sending waves up the chains to her nipples, and through her clit. Her ass is full up with the strap on, and the sight of herself in the mirror, all pierced, with the look of sex in her eyes, she knows she's going to cum soon, and its going to be good.

A few more thrusts, and the girl feels the convulsions start. Her knees buckle a little as they rip through her. Then a sensation she’s never felt begins. First she thinks she’s going to piss herself, and when the huge amounts of fluid start gushing down her legs, she thinks that’s what’s happened. Then she realises that, for the first time, she’s ejaculated. Her orgasm hits, wave after wave. The piercer is fucking her ass hard,as the chains vibrate madly up and down her taut body. The piercer also begins coming, her own ejaculate adding to the wet soppy mess. They collapse together on the floor, kissing, knowing their will be many more opportunities to continue.

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I was so horny thinking about this, that when the train finally got to Glasgow, I went straight to the toilet, locked myself in a cubicle, and finger fucked my way to orgasm. I didn’t squirt, but it was great. I’m, sure the woman next to me knew I was coming as I was moaning so loud, but I loved it.

Hope you liked my little story, maybe we could phone chat sometime...

Will write some more stuff for you if you like, really enjoy doing this, never done it before, feels naughty, but like you say, it isn’t cheating.

speak soon, L

After this we chatted regularly on MSN. Sometimes just chat. Sometimes we fucked, imagining our bodies squirming together as my thick cock stretched her soft dripping moist cunt. We loved writing dirty to each other, picturing the other masturbating furiously as we typed away.

Eventually I plucked the courage to ask Lisa if she fancied a chat on the phone. This was a delicate subject as I had mentioned it before but I think she found the idea a bit scary, a liitle bit too ‘real’. Surprisingly she said yes.

I had to organise a night when I would be away on business and when Lisa could be own her own. The run up to the night was just as scary as when I first met Lucy at the Central Station in Amsterdam. What did her voice sound like? How could I break the ice without sounding a complete idiot?

I texted Lisa a few hours before a couple of times, with each text getting more explicit. I usually got quick responses and I could tell that Lisa was both excited and scared shitless about our impending phone call.

We decided that I would ring her as I was on my mobile and the call would be expensive (hopefully). I dialed the number………the phone rang for ages..

She answered the phone and she had a very cute northern accent. I could place her to say Leeds, Bradford, Bolton areas. A Yorkshire lass basically. We skirted around for a bit, saying that it’s very weird to hear each others voices etc, etc. After a few minutes polite chitchat, I changed the subject and asked Lisa where she was. This was a double-sided question, in the hope that she might give a bit away. She didn’t tell me her geographic location but replied she was in her bedroom with door locked, the lights off, with two candles alight near her bed and an incense burner wafting sweet scent into the room. I asked what she was wearing and she said she was wearing red crotchless nickers and her 1950’s style push up breast hugging bra. Lovely.

I asked Lisa if she had a rabbit vibrator handy and some lube and she responded by putting the vibrator close to the phone, with it switched on. I took that as a yes.

I started to lay the scene, imaging if I was actually in her bedroom with her. I was now, in our minds at least, tying Lisa to the bed posts, using soft strips of silk, with her facing the bed, with her ass pointing upwards. I started to kiss the back of her neck while stroking her body. My hands feeling her breasts, the back of her neck, her inner thigh, the mold of her pussey through her panties, running my hands constantly across her body. At the same time I was telling Lisa how much I wanted her tonight and how much she was going to enjoy fucking me.

I could tell Lisa was enjoying this, as she was giving out short low moans and responses down the phone. I wasn’t sure if she was yet pleasuring herself but my descriptions were obviously turning her on. I carried on……..

I was now rubbing her moist panties with one hand, feeling the shape of her cunt lips through the increasing wet material. With the other had I gently stroked her inner thighs. I then gently started removing her panties. My God she has THE perfect ass, very tight and well formed. I then pushed my right had under her bum and started to rub her clit lips for the first time, feeling her wetness on my fingers. She writhed at the first touch and then settled down, gently, rhythmically motioning her demanding cunt against my fingers.

As I described this to Lucy she gave a soft moan as if she was stroking her pussey as we spoke. I asked if she was pleasuring herself and she said she was. ‘This is fucking amazing’ she whispered.

I was now fully naked, both in real life and in Lisa’s bedroom. Lisa was on her knees with her ass in the air. I positioned my cock to just below her pussey lips and with one hand made sure that my now very erect cock was gently rubbing against her cunt lips. Riding on her moistness.

With the other hand, I cupped Lisa’s breasts. They weren’t massive at all, but a good hand full. Her nipples were now erect and as I continued to move my cock against her cunt lips, teasing her, I began to stroke her nipples gently.

This was now, in reality, having a great effect on Lisa. Her moaning was now deep and I could occasionally hear the distinctive sounds of a pussey being rubbed vigorously.

‘Lisa are you still with me’ I asked. ‘Oh yes,mmmmmmmm, I am’ she replied.

I asked her to get her get her vibrator ready. I was going to phone fuck her and I wanted her to fuck herself as I described the action. She loved this idea.

I removed my cock for a minute and started to gently slap Lisa’s bum. Nothing violent or painful just a very light tap making sure the vibrations of the slaps would be felt towards the lips of her pussey. I then dribbled saliva on her ass cheeks and on one of my fingers. One hand started to finger fuck Lisa as I slowly slipped a finger into Lisa’s ass with the other.

At this point, Lisa gave a loud audible groan as she had obviously just stuck the small part of the rabbit into her ass and the larger part into her cunt.

With my finger in Lisa’s ass I now positioned my cock near her pussey and slowly pushed it in.

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Hope you liked the story. Your contributions would be greatly received.

bob
 
Wow! I was gonna help you with your story but my name is Lisa and I fell out of chair.
 
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