Looking for an editor

[AliceElectric]

Sorry I'm a new author so I'm not exactly sure how everything works yet. I wrote my first story: https://www.literotica.com/s/helping-out-my-parents-neighbor and I'm interested in finding an editor. For now I am writing non-con but I could see branching out into more BDSM, romance, or group stuff. As far as editing I would love feedback on grammar, dialogue, and continuity but I am potentially interested in plot suggestions and advice also. I'm not super comfortable doing feedback in a public thread or anything but feel free to message me if you are interested and think we might be a good fit? Thanks!

 

[blackstallion21]

It was a well written story. You may want to run it through a Spell check, I noticed a few misspelled words... (a.e. near was spelled newar once, etc)

The only other thing I might mention would to make more of a lead up just to give yes readers a little more before she's getting s.a.'d in the kitchen... it seemed to rocket quickly into the scene...

But other than that, not a bad read

 

[AliceElectric]

I wrote a 2nd story here: https://www.literotica.com/s/mr-fenton-pt-02 and am still looking!