Looking for an editor.

[Eslb]

I wrote a short Story and sent it in.
They rejected it due to punctuation. I reworked it to the best of my ability, and re-submitted it.
They still rejected it for dialog punctuation. My choices are forget it and move on, try to rework the dialog again, or work with an editor.
So in short, I need your help.
The story is currently in pages, but a pages document will transfer over to MS Word.
Please help....

 

[AlinaX]

How long is it?

 

[Eslb]

Thank you for replying to my request.
It is currently 2,527 words long. It is about a young girl who answers a ad for a massage parlor, and it turns out that the places for happy endings. In the story, there was one scenario with male nudity and a hand job.
I submitted it and it got rejected for dialogue punctuation. I did the best I could to rework it and resubmitted. It got rejected again for the same reasons I could really use an editor at this point thank you for replying to my request.

 

[AlinaX]

If you're happy using Google docs, send me a PM and I can have a look.

 

[Eslb]

Can I email you a Pages document?

 

[AlinaX]

To read, yes. To edit, no.

 

[Eslb]

First of all- Thanks!!
I am going to send you the text that was rejected.

 

[Eslb]

I sent you a copy of what was rejected. Please let me know what you think.

 

[Eslb]

If you still can not find it, I will set up a google doc with it tomorrow.