Have a story idea and would appreciate feedback.
Story told from the guys point of view. Either Ex-Military or back home from somewhere. He lives in a Cul de Sac that's fairly private from the rest of the neighborhood aside from 5 houses.
Story mainly focuses on him, his Situation and rebuilding his life. Tall, well built, hung and attractive, he's never had a problem getting the ladies. So there are 4 couples that live in the Cul De Sac with him. He meets them, forms friendships with them, but the wives want a little more than friendship.
My basic outline for the couples. Loosely based on people I've met in the past.
1st couple: Mark and Sarah) 23 year old Sarah is a blonde wife, fit, incredible body and outgoing and charming personality. Think the character Brandi in Joe Dirt, played by Britanny Daniel.
Joe the husband is fairly average in all respects.
Early to mid 20s, fairly nice people. But their bedroom is dead. Wife is frustrated and wants some fun and zeroes in on the MC. Husband it turns out is gay but in denial about his orientation. He can't keep it up for his sexy wife. He's not thrilled with the wife wanting to hook up with another man but can't complain too much as he's hooking up with men on the side. This arrangement if anything, keeps the peace between them.
2nd Couple: Dilan and Janet) married 11 years. Both are 30. Janet is a Brunette with brown eyes, got the Jennifer Love Hewitt look going on. Dilan looks like a surfer boy who hasn't yet lost his looks and body. Tanned and fit. They were high school sweethearts but their marriage is all over the place. Both are frustrated thst their lives are not where they want them to be. Their bedroom while active is a bit vanilla so they decide to open their bedroom. He's hooking up left and right but being discreet about it. She's too afraid to do anything but has a growing attraction to the MC.
3rd Couple is an Asian couple. Husband is a man with low libido and a beautiful wife in her late 20s (think a young Kelly Hu) who has a growing fascination with WM/AF. Husband has a hidden submissive/cuckold streak in him and wants to see his wife fuck the MC as much as she does.
(4th couple is Tom and Allison) early 40s, Allison is a red head. Their daughter left for college a few weeks prior and now they're kinda in a rut. Tom has fantasized for years of sharing his wife but never to her for fear of the blow back. Now he's noticing her growing attraction to the MC and thinks his dream might be realized. A more Vixen/Stag shared wife arrangement. Not into the humiliation stuff.
I get these are not well fleshed out. And I'll be honest, I'm not very confident in my ability to write it. Bit I would love some feedback and thoughts?
Story told from the guys point of view. Either Ex-Military or back home from somewhere. He lives in a Cul de Sac that's fairly private from the rest of the neighborhood aside from 5 houses.
Story mainly focuses on him, his Situation and rebuilding his life. Tall, well built, hung and attractive, he's never had a problem getting the ladies. So there are 4 couples that live in the Cul De Sac with him. He meets them, forms friendships with them, but the wives want a little more than friendship.
My basic outline for the couples. Loosely based on people I've met in the past.
1st couple: Mark and Sarah) 23 year old Sarah is a blonde wife, fit, incredible body and outgoing and charming personality. Think the character Brandi in Joe Dirt, played by Britanny Daniel.
Joe the husband is fairly average in all respects.
Early to mid 20s, fairly nice people. But their bedroom is dead. Wife is frustrated and wants some fun and zeroes in on the MC. Husband it turns out is gay but in denial about his orientation. He can't keep it up for his sexy wife. He's not thrilled with the wife wanting to hook up with another man but can't complain too much as he's hooking up with men on the side. This arrangement if anything, keeps the peace between them.
2nd Couple: Dilan and Janet) married 11 years. Both are 30. Janet is a Brunette with brown eyes, got the Jennifer Love Hewitt look going on. Dilan looks like a surfer boy who hasn't yet lost his looks and body. Tanned and fit. They were high school sweethearts but their marriage is all over the place. Both are frustrated thst their lives are not where they want them to be. Their bedroom while active is a bit vanilla so they decide to open their bedroom. He's hooking up left and right but being discreet about it. She's too afraid to do anything but has a growing attraction to the MC.
3rd Couple is an Asian couple. Husband is a man with low libido and a beautiful wife in her late 20s (think a young Kelly Hu) who has a growing fascination with WM/AF. Husband has a hidden submissive/cuckold streak in him and wants to see his wife fuck the MC as much as she does.
(4th couple is Tom and Allison) early 40s, Allison is a red head. Their daughter left for college a few weeks prior and now they're kinda in a rut. Tom has fantasized for years of sharing his wife but never to her for fear of the blow back. Now he's noticing her growing attraction to the MC and thinks his dream might be realized. A more Vixen/Stag shared wife arrangement. Not into the humiliation stuff.
I get these are not well fleshed out. And I'll be honest, I'm not very confident in my ability to write it. Bit I would love some feedback and thoughts?
) but I wonder if there could be a more interesting twist or set-up?
