Multi-generational family scene

[geronimo_appleby]

Just putting this here because I'm a frequent flyer in F&S Central. If I'm not always active, I'm lurking. Anyways, I'm looking for some assistance. I'm writing a piece across 3 generations. It's Nana and Grandad, their 2 sons and their wives, a son from one couple, and a daughter from the other. I'm okay with the action involved but think the scene would just be a boring old sex-fest to read about. There's scope for permutations with all the characters, but what I feel lacking is any sub-plot to make it more 'interesting.'

So, I'm turning to the forum for some suggestions...

Thanks. GA.

 

[Buffy47]

I think you are right to look for a sub-Plot that Draws them together,

Some options I can think of:

* One of the members has a Tiktok account and brings in members to create content which then leads to OF account and chasing those members encourages family to help.

* family used to be comfortable financially but something soon changes and the debt collectors come but they have different ideas how to collect their debts

* Nudist camp

* Trapped on an island after a bad storm, how the family bond trapped for a long time

 

[geronimo_appleby]

I think you are right to look for a sub-Plot that Draws them together,

Some options I can think of:

* One of the members has a Tiktok account and brings in members to create content which then leads to OF account and chasing those members encourages family to help.

* family used to be comfortable financially but something soon changes and the debt collectors come but they have different ideas how to collect their debts

* Nudist camp

* Trapped on an island after a bad storm, how the family bond trapped for a long time

Thanks for the suggestions. I appreciate it.

 

[Buffy47]

Thanks for the suggestions. I appreciate it.

Good luck with the story, let me know what you come up with

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Good luck with the story, let me know what you come up with

thanks. it's getting complex. i'm making notes on the characters so i don't fuck it up!

 

[Buffy47]

thanks. it's getting complex. i'm making notes on the characters so i don't fuck it up!

A long story always gets complicated, if not careful you end up forgetting who said what and their background,

 

[geronimo_appleby]

A long story always gets complicated, if not careful you end up forgetting who said what and their background,

and their names...

 

[Tio_Narratore]

How about the family runs a family-friendly (very "friendly") nudist camp. Their expenses have outstripped their revenue, mostly because they have big hearts and welcome anyone, paying or not, to their resort. Their creditors are a bit impatient, and grandpa invites them to spend some time at the camp. Leaves a lot of room for plot development as well as superficial secondary characters to add to the fun of convincing the male and female creditors that not only is the camp worth saving; it's worth becoming members

 

[Buffy47]

and their names...

It's happened to me in Long RPs with multiple Characters, easy to forget who had the larger breasts, who was the Farmer and who was holding the candlestick

and their names...

It's happened to me in Long RPs with multiple Characters, easy to forget who had the larger breasts, who was the maid and who was holding the candlestick in dinning room

 

[Tio_Narratore]

When I'm working on a long, multi-character story I write a brief character description for each and save them at the start of the story file. I do call it my cast of characters, and refer to it when needed.

 

[StrongMaster7]

I am usually more excited by the "seduction" of such relationships (in fiction) than the sex itself. If a grandparent "caught" a son or grandson jacking off to porn, that could lead to something. Or if the granddaughter or daughter saw how frustrated dad or granddad was and wanted to help, that could be exciting to me. It's the scenarios that lead tot he sex that I find hot. If the family had a Super Bowl party and some of the guests were seduced and it became an orgy, that could be good.

Those are just some ideas that appeal to me.

 

[TinyTricia]

For me, a good story or role play has to be logical. It cannot "just happen." There has to be some set of circumstances that move them in that direction and concludes with a large family group that begins this journey deeper into sexual wonder and orgasmic bliss. I do not have that brilliant mind that takes me into such a scene and allows me to produce the circumstances and the many characters, but I know a good one when I see it.
Also, it would be helpful if there was a dynamic already in place that has the family as close knit. The family might already be separately thinking of some form of what is about to happen, but most were not going so deep and wide. Might there be a time in the past when father and daughter were "playing around" but stopped at some point? Might this daughter have had a daughter and son with whom she also had some "special times" but it did not go as deep and continue for very long. SO, there are three generations who have a connection. An author's work is to figure out that "moment" or that "event" or "spark" that turns things. In my mind it would be some big thing that happened to them all. I have rambled unusally much for me today....thanks for listening.