Payback on cheating husband goes wrong

michaelhee12

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I just had this idea for a story that I think is cool and don't think I've seen anywhere.

The story begins with a husband cheating on his wife.
The wife finds out and is wanting to get back at him and confides with a younger man from the neighborhood.
The younger man agrees and when the moment comes, the husband unexpectedly shows up.
Instead of fighting the other man, he decides to humilate him by having sex with his wife - the one who the younger man was going to give it to.
 
To reiterate
She meets with another man.
The husband shows up.
But, the husband decides to show he's still better than the new lover by outperforming him in bed, with the wife he's cheating on.

It's interesting, but I think your forgetting how emotionally charged the situation is. She's furious. Mad enough to get revenge sex. Then husband shows up to ruin it? Enraged would be the word I'd use to describe the wife now.

I can't imagine her letting him within five feet of her right now. The arrogance it would take for him to show up and say, "Even though I'm fucking my secretary, I'm still the best you'll find." Hubris indeed. What a monumental ego that would take, and she would have to be the most submissive woman of all time to stand for it.

And of course the new lover would back down, as no one would want to get in the middle of that.
 
We could add some level of estrangement. Husband has been working out since they don't see each other much, wife hasn't realized he's a freaking monster underneath his clothing and could crush the new boy. His fitness has transferred to other parts of his life including a stronger erection. It would start off as non-reluctance and turn into her begging for more cock as he fucks her in ways he hasn't before. He makes her cum three times and leaves her gaping pussy filled with his cum. He turns to the boy.

"You think you can do better?". The boy looks as the husband and sees his massive cock hanging and decides he wants no part of this and leaves.

"I'll give you this whenever you want honey. I love you. Forever. But I need some freedoms."

She's in a post-orgasmic state of utter bliss, drool is running down her chin, pussy destroyed and after orgasming three times she's barely able to move.

"Whatever you want" she whispers.
 
To reiterate
She meets with another man.
The husband shows up.
But, the husband decides to show he's still better than the new lover by outperforming him in bed, with the wife he's cheating on.

It's interesting, but I think your forgetting how emotionally charged the situation is. She's furious. Mad enough to get revenge sex. Then husband shows up to ruin it? Enraged would be the word I'd use to describe the wife now.

I can't imagine her letting him within five feet of her right now. The arrogance it would take for him to show up and say, "Even though I'm fucking my secretary, I'm still the best you'll find." Hubris indeed. What a monumental ego that would take, and she would have to be the most submissive woman of all time to stand for it.

And of course the new lover would back down, as no one would want to get in the middle of that.
That's actually what's interesting about the idea (to me).

She wants revenge and is 100% ready to act on it, then he shows up and plays on her emotions. He sings sweet nothings into her ear to and him being her husband, she's succumbs - all in front of the poor cuck(?), who had no intentions on being apart of any of it.

Thank you for your input, I love hearing what others think about the idea.
 
We could add some level of estrangement. Husband has been working out since they don't see each other much, wife hasn't realized he's a freaking monster underneath his clothing and could crush the new boy. His fitness has transferred to other parts of his life including a stronger erection. It would start off as non-reluctance and turn into her begging for more cock as he fucks her in ways he hasn't before. He makes her cum three times and leaves her gaping pussy filled with his cum. He turns to the boy.

"You think you can do better?". The boy looks as the husband and sees his massive cock hanging and decides he wants no part of this and leaves.

"I'll give you this whenever you want honey. I love you. Forever. But I need some freedoms."

She's in a post-orgasmic state of utter bliss, drool is running down her chin, pussy destroyed and after orgasming three times she's barely able to move.

"Whatever you want" she whispers.
You are amazing!!
I love the transformation of the husband and the forgetfulness of the wife, seeing her husband as, practically, a whole new man.

Thank you for that
 
That's actually what's interesting about the idea (to me).

She wants revenge and is 100% ready to act on it, then he shows up and plays on her emotions. He sings sweet nothings into her ear to and him being her husband, she's succumbs - all in front of the poor cuck(?), who had no intentions on being apart of any of it.

Thank you for your input, I love hearing what others think about the idea.
Honestly, I would skip the 'sweet nothings'.
When he catches her, he is ready to take back what is his. She is incredibly angry with him for cheating. But he doesn't care, he just grabs her by the throat and tells her that if she needs to be fucked, he will show her what being fucked truly means. He reminds her that she's his and his alone.
She has never seen her husband like this, for a moment she is scared that he's going to force himself on her. But then she realizes she is incredibly wet and wants him to take her.

Maybe he sneers at the poor guy she was going to cheat with, something like "Hey, tiny dick, pay attention, you might actually learn something."
 
Honestly, I would skip the 'sweet nothings'.
When he catches her, he is ready to take back what is his. She is incredibly angry with him for cheating. But he doesn't care, he just grabs her by the throat and tells her that if she needs to be fucked, he will show her what being fucked truly means. He reminds her that she's his and his alone.
She has never seen her husband like this, for a moment she is scared that he's going to force himself on her. But then she realizes she is incredibly wet and wants him to take her.

Maybe he sneers at the poor guy she was going to cheat with, something like "Hey, tiny dick, pay attention, you might actually learn something."
Love it, love everything about it.

Those are the things I envisioned when I thought of a story like this.

Thank you
 
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