FunishmentGames
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Hi everyone,
I am currently in the process of writing a short series about a middle-aged man who finds kinky sex and even love after he and a spanking implement inadvertently go viral on social media. The stories fall into the erotic couplings category, with some kinky elements: consensual spanking, light bondage, toys.
I am having a lot of fun writing the stories, and I am looking for someone who can help me making reading them just as entertaining. Dialogues, description of erotic scenes, and character development are themes I would like feedback on. You will probably already have noticed I am not a native English speaker; I have lived in the UK, so I tend to write in UK English rather than US English, but my current location is more US-oriented, so I suppose there are some Americanisms and grammatical errors to weed out in the text as well.
Do you think you could help me with this? Or at least give me a few pointers and tips? Contact me through my DMs, and I will be delighted to send you the first (few) chapter(s) of the series for a test read.
Thank you very much in advance for your time and expertise!
Best regards,
FunishmentGames
I am currently in the process of writing a short series about a middle-aged man who finds kinky sex and even love after he and a spanking implement inadvertently go viral on social media. The stories fall into the erotic couplings category, with some kinky elements: consensual spanking, light bondage, toys.
I am having a lot of fun writing the stories, and I am looking for someone who can help me making reading them just as entertaining. Dialogues, description of erotic scenes, and character development are themes I would like feedback on. You will probably already have noticed I am not a native English speaker; I have lived in the UK, so I tend to write in UK English rather than US English, but my current location is more US-oriented, so I suppose there are some Americanisms and grammatical errors to weed out in the text as well.
Do you think you could help me with this? Or at least give me a few pointers and tips? Contact me through my DMs, and I will be delighted to send you the first (few) chapter(s) of the series for a test read.
Thank you very much in advance for your time and expertise!
Best regards,
FunishmentGames
