Taming The Tomboy (Request)

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The title pretty much nails it, although I could use some help with the details. Everytime I think of something, the thought vanishes as soon as my fingers touch the keyboard.

Perhaps something starting off non-consentual, leading up to something hot, between an adult male and this 18 year young, athletic, yet innocent girl.

Maybe the girl finds herself in need of money, which prompts her to search through the want-ads. She applies for a housesitting position. Her job: to look after the house while the owner is away. During her stay she has an unexpected visitor...

I'd love to recieve some creative ideas from other posters/authors.
 
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ladyraeharrison said:
Maybe the girl finds herself in need of money, which prompts her to search through the want-ads.

I don't know if this is what you are looking for, but what about this:

She sees an ad, where someone needs some help around the house. Or even better: Her neighbour ask her for help. Some stuff at his house need to be fixed/cleaned. Therefore she will get some money.

Well, at first, they clean out the room, but then, they notice, that cleaning ain't enough. The house also needs some fresh paint. She offers to help him paint the house. However, she needs some workers/painters clothes, because she doesn't want to ruin her good clothes with paint spots. The neighbour has some older pants and shirts or an overall, that she can wear during the painting.
When she changes into the overall, she doesn't care that he can see her in her underwear ...
Later she even takes a shower, and she doesn't care to take all her clothes off in front of him. After all, he is the nice older guy from next door. She knows him all her life long (so this would be like 18 to 20 years) .... but that doesn't keep him from becoming horny ....
 
ladyraeharrison said:
The title pretty much nails it, although I could use some help with the details. Everytime I think of something, the thought vanishes as soon as my fingers touch the keyboard.

Perhaps something starting off non-consentual, leading up to something hot, between an adult male and this 18 year young, athletic, yet innocent girl.

Maybe the girl finds herself in need of money, which prompts her to search through the want-ads. She applies for a housesitting position. Her job: to look after the house while the owner is away. During her stay she has an unexpected visitor...

I'd love to recieve some creative ideas from other posters/authors.

Rather than housitting, which is girlish, how about a boyish job such as doing oil changes? After work, she and her coworker are hosing down the shop......etc.....
 
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sirhugs said:
Rather than housitting, which is girlish, how about a boyish job such as doing oil changes? After work, she and her coworker are hosing down the shop......etc.....

I like that idea a lot; it instantly brings up such a great image of a short haired girl in overalls, a little bit dirty, being gradually engaged in this sexual way. It's great, because it just feels very real and very natural, and is a rather more original take on the ugly duckling theme, where usually a very geeky girl truns out to be a real beauty.
 
yeah, this sounds really good.

Since her childhood, she never cared much about barbie dolls, skirts and makeup. She prefered cars and motorbikes, wearing jeans. And her prefered makeup was engine oil ....

So she was used to hang around with boys, especially since she got her drivers license.

She starts to save her money and once she turned 18, she buys and old, damaged car and starts to rebuild it. She spents most of her time in the garage, working on the car. For the mechanics in the garage, she is like a little sister .... or maybe even like a little brother. They help her, but she also does many things bye herself. So she also gets dirty and oily. In the evening, she wants to take a shower ... well, there is only one big shower for all the mechanics. But since she is used to work together with them, she has no problem to shower together with them.
With her short hair and the big overall, she never looked erotic. But now, she is nude. And even though her body is just average (she ain't a big busty supermodel), her nude boobs and her (shaved ? I hope so) pussy make all the other guys in the shower horny. Accidently she drops the soap and when she bows down to pick it up, all the guys take a long look at her ass. Then, some of the guys offer to soap her back ..... of course, some of the guys get a hard one ....
 
ladyraeharrison said:
The title pretty much nails it, although I could use some help with the details. Everytime I think of something, the thought vanishes as soon as my fingers touch the keyboard.

Perhaps something starting off non-consentual, leading up to something hot, between an adult male and this 18 year young, athletic, yet innocent girl.

Maybe the girl finds herself in need of money, which prompts her to search through the want-ads. She applies for a housesitting position. Her job: to look after the house while the owner is away. During her stay she has an unexpected visitor...

I'd love to recieve some creative ideas from other posters/authors.

How can I get a message to you. I have several ideas and one story about this, "Teaching the Tomboy", not yet posted

Homer
vargas111[at]yahoo.com
 
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