The Maderez Curse (In need of a new author)

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The Maderez Curse (In need of an author)

This is the outline of a story I started on years ago. Please post comments/suggestions/ideas:


My friends dared me to walk through the woods at 12
midnight, alone, during the snow storm. For proof, I
was to go deep into the woods, to the top of the hill,
and grab something from the beautiful, but creepy,
cabin.

The story behind the cabin is that it once belonged to
a very wealthy businessman named Jaques Maderez. It is
believed that he was killed by Francheska Alfaro, his
fiancee and a great sorcerer, after she discovered his
affair with Princess Angelisha Maulahee (mole-lay-hee)
the princess of Nurabi. They say Francheska casted a
spell which sealed Jaques's soul into the cabin for 10
centuries. Princess Angelisha was horrified by the
news of her beloved's death. She was so shaken that
she locked herself in the room of her castle, and
wouldn't speak to anyone ever again, not even to her
sister and bestfriend Lora Maulahee. To break the
spell he must penetrate the folds of Princess Angelisha's kin, three days straight. (I'm sure someone can come up with a better much better spell breaker than this)

So here I am with my backpack full of supplies:
flashlight, clothes (in case I had to stay the night),
matches, a lighter, a first aid kit, and food, and I'm
half way there. "Ha! Piece of cake!" I think aloud to myself as I wonder up the snow-covered mountain and through the spooky woods, the flash light barely penetrating the darkness....



And thats where my ideas ran out. Can anyone bring this story to life? Comments please.
 
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