The Satin Devotees and The Throne of Desire

[Prodiver]

Hello all,
I felt inspired to write these two poems that explore two areas of sexuality that really resonate with me. My stories have featured these same elements, but it was a very different process looking at them in a more abstract way.
Any comments gratefully received. I’ve realised, posting things here, that it doesn’t matter at all if some people really dislike one’s work, because there are others who love it and it was created for them.

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

I don't think you attached those two poems... but if you do, I'll give them a read.

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

a read...and then lots of helpful commentary!

because, I'm also a poet... check this out:

buttons, buttons, why do your pants have so many damn buttons?
because I'm in the Navy, ma'am, and I'm wearing my dress blues...

Yeah, I should've spotted those clues...
And now I ((what the fuck rhymes with the word 'buttons'??))

 

[Angeline]

Here's a link to the two poems the poet is referencing in case you have time to read and comment.

Prodiver welcome to the poetry forum. Please join in any of the challenges or threads that interest you.

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

to be clear, I do like poetry... wasn't poking fun -- that's why I threw in my Robert Frost (buttons) reference

still, I have tried my hand at it but to no avail. My first line ended at 'ethereal' and then I was done. Which is to say, I hold poets in the highest esteem!

 

[Prodiver]

Thanks Angeline. As you can see, I’ve not been around here much!

 

[Angeline]

a read...and then lots of helpful commentary!

because, I'm also a poet... check this out:

buttons, buttons, why do your pants have so many damn buttons?
because I'm in the Navy, ma'am, and I'm wearing my dress blues...

Yeah, I should've spotted those clues...
And now I ((what the fuck rhymes with the word 'buttons'??))

Leg o muttons?

Or you could go with a near rhyme like shut-ins

Yeah they're not so good, huh?

OR

Meet my BFF Rhyme Zone

 

[Angeline]

Thanks Angeline. As you can see, I’ve not been around here much!

No problem. I was new here once and the poets welcomed me, a kindness I've never forgotten.

 

[MrMrsMrsMr]

a read...and then lots of helpful commentary!

because, I'm also a poet... check this out:

buttons, buttons, why do your pants have so many damn buttons?
because I'm in the Navy, ma'am, and I'm wearing my dress blues...

Yeah, I should've spotted those clues...
And now I ((what the fuck rhymes with the word 'buttons'??))

Yeah, I should’ve spotted those clues, with my gloved finger button gluttons.

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

Yeah, I should’ve spotted those clues, with my gloved finger button gluttons.

buttons, buttons, why do your pants have so many damn buttons?
because I'm in the Navy, ma'am, and I'm wearing my dress blues...

Yeah, I should've spotted those clues
when you freed & kissed my hand from my fingered glove

I thank you for your service, you have my love
then I drop to my knees and pay homage like a multitude of gluttons.

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

okay, I'm done... time to seriously read @Prodiver's poems! Here we go...

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

apologies for my faux pas...

 

[MrMrsMrsMr]

apologies for my faux pas...

No apologies to anyone needed, the poets forum is laid back and faux pas supportive Come have fun write some poems in the challenges threads x

 

[Wat_Tyler]

Or start your own poems thread.


We lack Anal Retention here, and it is refreshing considering how hung up some other fora are.

 

[Jocelyn_Nicole_Sawyer]

Or start your own poems thread.


We lack Anal Retention here, and it is refreshing considering how hung up some other fora are.

That's me! (4th from Left / 6th from right) ;-)

 

[Ash999]

Hello all,
I felt inspired to write these two poems that explore two areas of sexuality that really resonate with me. My stories have featured these same elements, but it was a very different process looking at them in a more abstract way.
Any comments gratefully received. I’ve realised, posting things here, that it doesn’t matter at all if some people really dislike one’s work, because there are others who love it and it was created for them.

Having read your poems Bro, Satin Panty fetish and Cuckoldry are 2 fetishes which often may attract the same persons becoz many Cuckolds R panty Fetishists and vice versa... both R hugely popular in the Fetish Lit forum....your poems were easy on the senses and erotic and while the Fetish forums R full of pics and discourses they R not really poetry connoisseurs and do not respond very eagerly to poems, unfortunately but here the Poets will certainly encourage you but while there are genuine poetry lovers here they may not share the 2 fetishes which you have so competently showcased!!! In fact in the Fetish forum they will happily and enthusiastically respond to pic/s of Satin Panties and Cuckoldresses but not much enthu for poems on both subjects.
Congrats on your super Entry into the Poetry Forum, Bro!!!

 

[Prodiver]

Thanks Ash. I agree that those two fetishes overlap with enthusiasts. Here’s another… https://www.literotica.com/p/a-queen-s-dominion