TheLobster
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Also:Seems like a nitpick, but I think I'd also consider paragraphs that go:
"Blah blah," he said.
"Blah blah blah," she replied.
"Blah blah blah!" he insisted.
"Blah blah blah?"
as dialogue-only. To me, that's a 100% dialogue sequence, but in a double-quote-only model it's 25%. Not sure to pick that up.
“Hey,” he said, “this is dialogue, too!”
I have a tendency to write most of my dialogue this way, so OP’s methodology would classify even my most dialogue-heavy pieces to contain less than 10% dialogue.