Adjectivitis

[Tathagata]

subdued penis
makes
a cold
melancholy world

 

[Guest]

subdued
deflated
flattened
flacid
asleep

sudden arousal
stirring

rising

risen.......

 

[JCSTREET]

IN A WORD

a world
cold
subdued
melancholy

in a dude
melancholy cold

subdued
sub rosa
subluxation

in a word, the
world
is cold
subdued, and
melancholy

 

[Angeline]

Risen?

the morning
sea of your eyes
drowsy shaded to deep
warm moves slow
tracks rhythm
primordial

the morning
ocean bed swells
undulates

the morning
valley of palms
tussock-ridged
to penninsulas of fingers
slip textured

the morning
feathers of skin
stretch wing-armed
your avis, your flight
lifting sleepy mouthed

the morning
lapse of time
curving up
the sheath of Sun
risen

 

[JCSTREET]

not necssarily so ma man

subdued penis
makes
a cold
melancholy world

it is simply at its resting potential--signaling all good things, you might have written

the risen penis, thrilling in its
intensity presages only
post-
coital triste (sse??)

RANDOM THOUGHTS

(on a latish friday evening)

1. I wish we had a chat room

2. I understand intellectually the need for separate
threads for separate ideas but - the intense navigation
required for these thread to thread jumps can be debilitating, one
feels at times a creeping inchoacy.

3. To Lauren: (just kidding)

4. To Boo: (no disrespect but I guess it's too late for all
that now)

5. To Tara: (to Tara the word unspoken is the more
plangent--limned by the first evening star)


LITTLE GIRL: what do you do on destroyers mister?

LIEUTENANT: "I drive 'em and park 'em"