anonomous feedback

[janiexx]

ok ladies. gimme a couple of ideas of where you want the story to go. and gimme a couple of days I'll have it done by tuesday.

Seth...

What about someone with a hair fetish...?

One of the things I love is to have my hair played with (on top of my head )
and if we're having Tawny's tresses as a feature of the story, why not make the most of them?

Or maybe, an ex-girlfriend had long tawny locks and he is constantly looking for someone like her?

Just a few ideas! Can't wait to read it!

janiexx

 

[sethp]

You too

Janiexx I need just a tiny bit of info from you to finish the story..I tiny description of you or something about you. the story centers around Tawny's hair though! lol

 

[janiexx]

What a story!

Hi Seth,

I've sent you a PM about the story - definitely think it should be submitted to the site...

And hopefully a sequel is in the pipeline??

Thanks very much,
janie xx

 

[sethp]

submitted

ok I submitted it. Thanks! Maybe a sequel.. Let's see what Tawny says first! lol I'm not quite sure she'll like it! Oh and thank both of you ladies for the inspiration!

 

[Hotenuf4u]

Speaking of stories...

Which kind of stories do you ladies like to see? I'm not sure my stories are female compatible but I could easaily try any type you want.

 

[sethp]

well

Well if you're going to write a story on this thread the center has to be Tawny's amazing, sexy Hair!

 

[sethp]

I...

I miss tawny!

 

[sethp]

oh no!

I still miss Tawny!

 

[sethp]

now!

I really really miss tawny!

 

[christabelll]

Not only that but many times the feedback does not even relate to any of your stories. I get two kinds:

"Nice ass, baby"

and

"You are a sick f**king Bitch. I can tell you are nothing but a Black, Nigger, Slut Whore." In truth, I'm very much caucasion and not Black. The story had nothing to do with me.

To the first I never respond. To the second I send a nice thank-you note to the Red-Neck Klansman who sent it with my best wishes for his future burning in Hell.

JJ

Hahah... that sounds just like you... Great Come back!

 

[rydia57]

I got three anonymous feedbacks on my latest story. They all told me it was shit and to go back to hs or whatever. At first it hurt me, then I kinda felt good cos they were anon trolls and if they were legit they would have names. So I felt like I broke my cherry or something. Those weenies just don' any guts tho.

 

[Northsider]

Put your money where your little troll mouth is, Anon!

My last story got slammed, as well. The 15 nasty replies included 10 anons, and only one of the five who left their username had written any submissions.

"Judge, and be prepared to be judged."

Ayn Rand

 

[Tribade]

On a different thread I posted about trolls, not just on Literotica, but on other forums they follow the same pattern. They wait for someone to write a story, poem, or start a thread then tear into it. Not following my mantra of "Constructive" criticism being welcome they usually come up with something like, "Your story was shit!" but no reason why it was shit or how, in their opinion,to improve in future. Could it be they don't have a clue about writing anything? The point about these creeps not submitting anything themselves is well taken.I wonder if they realise how tough it is to put your baby out in public view and let people criticise what you thought was "GOOD" work. I've had one story accepted, one rejected twice, two pending and have just resubmitted one that was rejected for poor spelling.These were written on my old,coal fired, steam powered computer. I have just bought a brand new P.C. and oh lord be praised for Microsoft word and it's spell checker, life's so much easier now. My spelling's quite good but write 4000 words and without a spell check facility mistakes will slip through no matter how careful you are. If my story is rejected again I'll read the reason for it and go back and try to put things to rights. If you don't try you'll never learn so let's see what the trolls can do before they slag off us writers as we attempt to get better at it.

 

[sethp]

amen!

 

[kellyhockey]

People look at my profile picture and feel free to criticize my hair. WHY?
I don't care if they criticize the poem I posted, that's different.
I know the hair is outdated. I also know I live in a country where it is my right to choose my own hairstyle, the same as it is their right to find fault with it. Now I have no gripe about the people who leave feedback, good or bad, about my poem. Just leave my hair alone.

Little people..with little minds..with little...(well you know)...

Your hair is fine....

 

[sethp]

This was actually the best thread of all time. Alas Tawny is gone...where we do not know!