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Naked Little Pixie
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Over, and repeated, use of "I", "He" and/or "She" in the narrative, depending on if the story is written in the first or third person.
By repeated, i mean like every other sentence.... "I (he, she) slowly unbuttoned her blouse. I ran my tongue across her hard nipple. i sucked as much of her breast into my mouth as i could get."
By repeated, i mean like every other sentence.... "I (he, she) slowly unbuttoned her blouse. I ran my tongue across her hard nipple. i sucked as much of her breast into my mouth as i could get."