BDSM Haiku

[Uggg]

Anticipation
Waiting for what will follow
"Oh Gods! Fuck me! Ahhhhhh!"

 

[HBergeron]

Your limits are truth
Your punishments sacrosanct
Fear me, don't fear me

 

[sanishen]

I love to be held
But never out at arms length
Bodies close for heat

I love to use boys
who once upon a time dreamed
that they were real men

 

[sanishen]

It's unlimited
devotion and surrender
I want, boy; that's all.

 

[Uggg]

It's your unlimited
devotion and surrender
I want, boy; that's all.

Respectfully suggest removing 'your' from the first line as it currently has six syllables.

Like your style

Uggg

 

[Uggg]

I love to use boys
who once upon a time dreamed
that they were real men

Devotion follows,
Only after love and trust
Have been established.

 

[Uggg]

Sensual, gentle, kind
Opens the door in my mind.
Conquered from within.

 

[BadAmy]

My tears mark comfort,
They validate suffering.
Your pleasure, my pain.

 

[sanishen]

Respectfully suggest removing 'your' from the first line as it currently has six syllables.

Like your style

Uggg

Respect is needed,
but trust is the foundation
of true devotion

 

[sanishen]

My tears mark comfort,
They validate suffering.
Your pleasure, my pain.

Each tear builds like dew
before dawn and has magic
that is all its own

 

[BadAmy]

Oh, yours is the stuff
With which all visions portray
My need for release

 

[Uggg]

I'm Sorry Sir Haiku

Knowing I have failed
Is a punishment itself
But I deserve more

Uggg

 

[Uggg]

Naughty girls need rewards too

She looked so helpless,
And she looked so satisfied.
Hung there, bound and tied.

Whimpers of pleasure,
Desires wound as she was bound.
Now released, she's free.

Uggg

 

[BadAmy]

Never completely.
Always within his tight grasp
She breathlessly waits.

 

[Uggg]

You are the strong shield
Around my fragile spirit
I feel secure now

Uggg

 

[Uggg]

Can't sit down today
Had to wear a long sleeve shirt
Feeling very proud



Uggg

 

[BadAmy]

You broke most of me
With poison and fiery hate.
Still... remember, "most".

 

[sanishen]

Equality

Naughty boys should be
disciplined just as harshly:
equality rules

 

[BadAmy]

I laughed so hard when
You tripped over the toy bag
And dildos fell out.

 

[EmpressJosephine]

You bind my thin wrists

 

[BadAmy]

You bind my thin wrists

I lift them high above you

 

[Uggg]

I laughed so hard when
You tripped over the toy bag
And dildos fell out.

BadAmy I love this one! Could I please have your permission to repost it in my poetry thread?

Uggg

 

[BadAmy]

BadAmy I love this one! Could I please have your permission to repost it in my poetry thread?

Uggg

Absolutely

 

[Uggg]

My thanks

Uggg

 

[Uggg]

Wiggly invader.
Finger teasing and pleasing.
I writhe, thrash and gasp.

Uggg