FreyasMuse
Really Really Experienced
- Joined
- Oct 6, 2008
- Posts
- 327
Tingles from a kiss
unexpected, so pleasing
the skin burns for more
unexpected, so pleasing
the skin burns for more
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This is a Haiku.
This thing, right here, just like this.
That's not a Haiku.
This is a Haiku.
This thing, right here, just like this.
That's not a Haiku.
This is a Haiku.
This thing, right here, just like this.
That's not a Haiku.
a Japanese poem of seventeen syllables, in three lines of five, seven, and five, traditionally evoking images of the natural world.
a poem in English written in the form of a haiku.
Thank you Collar_N_Cuffs i shall try to do better!
Bravo!
Now work the seasonal element in there and I will really be impressed
And you should turn on your PMs if you want to receive private messages here
Thank you very much, you have made me feel very happy. i am new...where do i turn on my private messages and what exactly is a seasonal element for Haiku....winter, summer, spring, fall?
And yes, seasonal element/nature reference.
I have only managed what I consider the perfect Haiku once.
And that's not for lack of trying..
Is it here? i would love to read it please?
I believe it is, but I'm not reviewing 98 pages of Haiku to find it!