Brit vs. Yank

How odd that he tried to change the dialogue. I think I'd only do that if it seemed like the character was going for a Shakespearean soliloquy or if the language used sounded stilted already.



Ooh, now I'm trying to guess which one. :)

I'm hoping there are thousands. :eek:

But I can share a pm with a trusted person. Besides, maybe I'm wrong.:D

Oh, and as for my dialogue. One excellent writer here fairly shouted at me when I mentioned changing it, so never fear. When I'm finally told I've done something right ... especially when it's someone I trust. :) And it was odd that the editor did give me recommendations because he's also previously praised my dialogue. Now ... if I could just figure out who to write the rest of the story. :rolleyes:

And for all you Welsh, I'll part with my only Welsh phrase:

Nos da, :rose:
and rest well.
 
Well, I don't think I could go as far as saying I love rugby. But it's one hell of a lot better than football (that's 'soccer', to my US friends :D)
 
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