driphoney
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How odd that he tried to change the dialogue. I think I'd only do that if it seemed like the character was going for a Shakespearean soliloquy or if the language used sounded stilted already.
Ooh, now I'm trying to guess which one.
I'm hoping there are thousands.
But I can share a pm with a trusted person. Besides, maybe I'm wrong.
Oh, and as for my dialogue. One excellent writer here fairly shouted at me when I mentioned changing it, so never fear. When I'm finally told I've done something right ... especially when it's someone I trust. And it was odd that the editor did give me recommendations because he's also previously praised my dialogue. Now ... if I could just figure out who to write the rest of the story.
And for all you Welsh, I'll part with my only Welsh phrase:
Nos da,
and rest well.