Challenge: The Perfect Ten (v2.0)

[Guest]

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[Guest]

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[Remec]

experienced,
iced hands
rubbing
sore shoulders
mmmm
bliss

I think I misspent
my time in
that lovely, little
state

 

[Remec]

My kiss is like venom
you say and I beg

A poison most becoming,
begging comparison to
Rappaccini...
much preferable.

 

[Guest]

Don't speak

begging
only written on paper
and hidden
underneath my mattress.

 

[Sara Crewe]

Blueberries are the girl next door,
even one taste stains.

 

[flyguy69]

Blueberries are the girl next door,
even one taste stains.

Looking up with guilty grin:
girl-next-door all over my chin.

 

[Sara Crewe]

Bad-boys taste like ice cream
going down
then brain-freeze hits.

 

[flyguy69]

Bad-boys taste like ice cream
going down
then brain-freeze hits.

Going down
makes bad girls
into sweet and sticky puddles.

 

[vampiredust]

poem clouds infest
sewers

water starts
to sing

 

[Sara Crewe]

Umbrella spokes of arms and legs
cover until she's wet.

 

[flyguy69]

poem clouds infest
sewers

water starts
to sing

Rhymes rise
like mist, pure distillate
of submerged music.

 

[cherries_on_snow]

Rain!

Reign of humidity ended.

Glorious cool drops slice
through heat.

 

[cherries_on_snow]

10 years younger

Tastes silly girlish
on 40-year-old woman
tongue: boyfriend.

 

[vampiredust]

sunlight tastes cedars

slurping reddish bark
it falls, intoxicated

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

whether rain
(complain)
or sun
(shun)
weather never satisfies.

 

[cherries_on_snow]

Wasabi Peas

Green heat
nourishes
and burns
so good:
flame bathed tongue

 

[vampiredust]

The art pavilion at St James's church, Clerkenwell Green

the half opened
clamshell sits empty,

waiting for a critic

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

the half opened
clamshell sits empty,

waiting for a critic

Love this!

 

[373Kelvin]

Centrifugal force
pulls tighter
spiralling
your tower
climbing hair
ladder.

 

[373Kelvin]

Nothing affirms well-being
like driving, confidently,
using standard transmission.





(Calli, I took your hyphens are cheating comment to heart, see?)

 

[clutching_calliope]

.....

 

[cherries_on_snow]

Urban Jungle Gym

stairs are means not master;

all contexts chorus faster, faster.

 

[GuiltyPleasure]

This was the perfect day
that leaves you sighing
happily.

 

[vampiredust]

What you really want to hear at a pageant

fuck me, you wench!