Challenge: The Perfect Ten (v2.0)

[lindiana]

Stop telling me that I am worthy
And just prove it.

 

[Man Ray]

Ten..

seconds
minutes
hours
days
years
would never be time enough...

 

[lindiana]

ten

kisses,
touches,
caresses,
words,
licks,
tastes,
tickles,
proclamations,
aches,
needs!

 

[Reltne]

seconds
minutes
hours
days
years
would bever be enough time...

Suggestion: Reverse the last two words.
(and change "bever" to "never".)

 

[Guest]

pecker
penis
prick
Peter
how I love you.

 

[lindiana]

beavers
bushes
pussies

lick them
eat them
devour them


NOW

 

[Guest]

Womans minds
are sicker than men.
but mostly kept hidden.

 

[lindiana]

Believe that and I have a bridge to sell you.

 

[b8dbreth]

*****

 

[Stella_Omega]

I've got three words
for you;
Bitch,
Love me.

 

[cward2]

Fire crosses
the sea in a
boat of ice

 

[tungtied2u]

*****

 

[tungtied2u]

*****

 

[Stella_Omega]

love does not leave langously
but like a Leer jet

I LIKE that one!

 

[b8dbreth]

*****

 

[Christina O. Leigh]

tossing mental garbage
thinking positive
the new year, me
now begins

 

[Christina O. Leigh]

You say gay for idiot
making you an idiot.

 

[Guest]

*****

It always makes me sad
when poems
are deleted.
Why?

 

[Christina O. Leigh]

I've got three words
for you;
Bitch,
Love me.

Damn them dogs.
They never listen.

 

[Christina O. Leigh]

It always makes me sad
when poems
are deleted.
Why?

Sometimes it hurts
to remember thoughts
once written.

Pro deleter (is that a word? )

 

[Christina O. Leigh]

words,
deep, painful
cried on paper
sometimes
better tossed

 

[Remec]

words,
deep, painful
cried on paper
sometimes
better tossed

Balls of paper strewn
about the floor~
marked,
comtemplated,
forgotten.

 

[Blue Dolphin]

Ice lines sharp
bisecting sky
skirt the rose of Mars

 

[The_Fool]

sculptured ceiling tiles
offer no words
no guidance
only silence

 

[Liar]

you are
hot wine punch fumes
on a deep inhale