comments on poetry really suck

[HarryHill]

I have a new one coming out, K.S.F.O.S. (Killer Sluts from outer space) If it is approved, I am expecting all here to comment as they want. Abuse me or stroke me (please!) as you will. All is foder for growth.
What the hell is a gerund whore?

 

[bronzeage]

I have a new one coming out, K.S.F.O.S. (Killer Sluts from outer space) If it is approved, I am expecting all here to comment as they want. Abuse me or stroke me (please!) as you will. All is foder for growth.
What the hell is a gerund whore?

Has any poem submission ever not been approved?

A gerund whore is one who has sex in exchange for the bl'ing.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I have a new one coming out, K.S.F.O.S. (Killer Sluts from outer space) If it is approved, I am expecting all here to comment as they want. Abuse me or stroke me (please!) as you will. All is foder for growth.
What the hell is a gerund whore?

someone who uses lots of 'ing' ending words

Has any poem submission ever not been approved?

A gerund whore is one who has sex in exchange for the bl'ing.

Oiiiiiiiiiii Bronz slappppppppppp :caning:

 

[PandoraGlitters]

Has any poem submission ever not been approved?

A gerund whore is one who has sex in exchange for the bl'ing.

HAH!

 

[HarryHill]

Fuck! now I'm stuck on nonfinite verbs. I don't know if I'm coming or going. (heh heh) And by the way poems do get rejected if you use all capitals (blush)
Harry is leaving now.

 

[bronzeage]

Fuck! now I'm stuck on nonfinite verbs. I don't know if I'm coming or going. (heh heh) And by the way poems do get rejected if you use all capitals (blush)
Harry is leaving now.

We must have standards, even if they are so low the vacuum cleaner can roll over them.

 

[HarryHill]

Great line! A new caveat for Literotica?

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I've had one rejected

 

[lorencino]

Well here I am after a two-year hiatus and the first thread I read leaves me with the secure feeling that I am still

under your spell.

In spite of not being around for some time I will be bold enough to suggest to sinuous that, besides all the dross, there are some great minds here with generous hearts and all you need to do to benefit is keep an open heart and an open mind. (In time, too may find yourself under a spell.)

 

[bronzeage]

I've had one rejected

The one about the lonely shepherd, right?

 

[HarryHill]

A lonely shepherd walks in to a bar

The one about the lonely shepherd, right?

I'm hooked ...let's hear it...Please with ing on top?

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Well here I am after a two-year hiatus and the first thread I read leaves me with the secure feeling that I am still

under your spell.

In spite of not being around for some time I will be bold enough to suggest to sinuous that, besides all the dross, there are some great minds here with generous hearts and all you need to do to benefit is keep an open heart and an open mind. (In time, too may find yourself under a spell.)

Lorrrrrrr where have you been sweety? Welcome back

The one about the lonely shepherd, right?

Either you've cracked or I have ....... what *&^%@: shepherd?

 

[PandoraGlitters]

We must have standards, even if they are so low the vacuum cleaner can roll over them.

This made me laugh so hard I had to cross my legs.

 

[lorencino]

We must have standards, even if they are so low the vacuum cleaner can roll over them.

This made me laugh so hard I had to cross my legs.

Powerful pithy statements
Pithy powerful statements

the power to delight till my cheek muscles hurt

 

[lorencino]

Lorrrrrrr where have you been sweety? Welcome back



Either you've cracked or I have ....... what *&^%@: shepherd?

Any woman who calls me “sweety” has immediate and complete command of my body and mind. It is so disarming.

 

[HarryHill]

And they say I'm easy

 

[bronzeage]

Either you've cracked or I have ....... what *&^%@: shepherd?

I don't remember all of of it, but there was something about a shepherd named Wallace, who turned to his flock for solace.

I remember you rhymed "woolen" and "pulling", but the rest escapes me.

 

[HarryHill]

Sooo...no more about the Shepherd, eh?

 

[UnderYourSpell]

And they say I'm easy

and are you ?

I don't remember all of of it, but there was something about a shepherd named Wallace, who turned to his flock for solace.

I remember you rhymed "woolen" and "pulling", but the rest escapes me.

The only Wallace I know of has a dog called Grommet

 

[bronzeage]

and are you ?



The only Wallace I know of has a dog called Grommet

A sheepdog, of course.

 

[HarryHill]

You'll get the truth out of her? yet....Demure101 posted a poem today that had a sheep in it... no mention of a shepherd or sheepdog though....Grommet? There's grist for the mill there

 

[NeonSubtlety]

Has any poem submission ever not been approved?

A gerund whore is one who has sex in exchange for the bl'ing.

Yes...one of my earliest pieces is and has been rejected.
And sadly, it's a very revealing piece that craves sharpening. The author most influential to my work is Marie Howe...and she speaks frequently of pre-adult sexuality. I hate that my worn on the same subject is shunned.

 

[bronzeage]

Yes...one of my earliest pieces is and has been rejected.
And sadly, it's a very revealing piece that craves sharpening. The author most influential to my work is Marie Howe...and she speaks frequently of pre-adult sexuality. I hate that my worn on the same subject is shunned.

There are other subjects besides pre-adult sexuality which will not be posted on Literotica. This applies to prose and poetry. That is a different matter.

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Yes...one of my earliest pieces is and has been rejected.
And sadly, it's a very revealing piece that craves sharpening. The author most influential to my work is Marie Howe...and she speaks frequently of pre-adult sexuality. I hate that my worn on the same subject is shunned.

If you had read the rules of this place you would know that pre-adult is a no go area

 

[UnderYourSpell]

A sheepdog, of course.

You'll get the truth out of her? yet....Demure101 posted a poem today that had a sheep in it... no mention of a shepherd or sheepdog though....Grommet? There's grist for the mill there

If I can remember how I will show you who Wallace and Grommet are