SyleusSnow
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Heh. I actually worked that joke into the story. I don't think any reader got it.møøse bites Kan be pretti nasti...
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Heh. I actually worked that joke into the story. I don't think any reader got it.møøse bites Kan be pretti nasti...
Thanks for the reminder - power imbalances are one of my frequent themes.Often the theme is differences: "race", age gap, big vs small, rich vs poor, introvert vs extrovert, human vs moose...
Indeed. I try to be mindful of power imbalances in my stories.Thanks for the reminder - power imbalances are one of my frequent themes.
Character types:In looking at your writing here as a whole, do you have certain character types or turns of plot or specific phrases that you find yourself falling back on?
My practice is to keep my erotica reading separate from my regular reading. I read erotica here on Lit and I read everything else by patronizing my local library. But your qualities look so attractive from a plain old fiction perspective that I think I'll give them a shot. If they're not too long. If I encounter a really long Lit story that I want to read I have to copy it into a Word doc and send it to my Kindle.Character types:
Veteran (he or she or both) - patriotic and proud. A little worse for the wear but still proud. There always has to be a veteran somewhere in the plot
Well Educated - Either college or school of hard knocks. The only dummies I allow are the villains
Funny - gotta be able to tell a joke and take one too
Dark Past - always adds to the plot
Faithful - My couples are always exclusive and faithful to each other. Even in Loving Wives. They don't have to be married but they usually end up that way.
Strong - well, they are veterans, right?
Vulnerable - willing to open up to their partner when the darkness closes in
Phrases - I try to work in "my eyes are up here" somewhere in a story or series
Turns of Plot - Boy meets girl, after that it gets weird.
Couldn't agree more. Proportionality is the thing!!!I've only written two stories so far, but I think a theme would probably be "normal" guy. The male protag is never super ripped, or hung like a horse or anything like that. I tend to write perfectly normal dudes with modestly sized dicks.
I'll be honest, story can be really good and lose me the moment the male character pulls down his pants and is rocking a nine inch cock.
Unless you're Irish? Estimates are that 10 to 30 percent of Irish are some shade of red, making them the highest percent per capita in the world.I think redheads are probably a lot more common in Lit stories than they are in real life.
One of my first girlfriends had as bright a carrot top as I've ever seen, and an Irish name to go with it. She got the hair color from her mom, but her sister was brunette. She was also a genius with a gift for languages and spoke six before we graduated from High School. When last I checked she was an English professor at a small university near where we grew up.Unless you're Irish? Estimates are that 10 to 30 percent of Irish are some shade of red, making them the highest percent per capita in the world.
Seriously, coming from a family with a lot of Irish DNA on both sides, there were a lot of redheads in my family (3 generations of redheads in a row on one side, multiple redheads in at least two generations on the other), I felt myself lucky to be something other than red-headed and stayed as far away from redheads as I could when I was dating (one date with one redhead, one time!). I appreciate them now and about 20% of the female love-interests have red hair in my stories as a result.
Just remember: there's also a carrot down below.One of my first girlfriends had as bright a carrot top as I've ever seen, and an Irish name to go with it.
I assume that’s where you apply your stick.Just remember: there's also a carrot down below.
Also applies to women for me. I like my women proportionate, not wearing a size two pants and rocking E cups. I know ilyhose girls exist, but not every story needs a thin girl with giant tits.Couldn't agree more. Proportionality is the thing!!!
I've gotta say that I do enjoy one series where the guy's cock hangs "almost to my knees." I just have to grit my teeth and hop over that.