D(r)ead - critique please

[PatCarrington]

Ploughshares opened up for reading this week; maybe I'll send them something.

i just did.

i figure, what the fuck.

 

[flyguy69]

i just did.

i figure, what the fuck.

I just want to tell Country Mouse "Yeah? Well I've been turned down by better journals than you!"

 

[PatCarrington]

I just want to tell Country Mouse "Yeah? Well I've been turned down by better journals than you!"

i think you should.

i love anna's line:

...but, but, but...all my friends loved it!!!

 

[flyguy69]

i think you should.

i love anna's line:

...but, but, but...all my friends loved it!!!

The real cost of blanket praise!

 

[Lauren Hynde]

...but, but, but...all my friends loved it!!!

But they said they did!

 

[PatCarrington]

The real cost of blanket praise!

when you start submitting for real, they burn that blanket quick.

so no sense rubbing up against too much.

 

[flyguy69]

But they said they did!

If your friends are all publishers, you've got no problem.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

If your friends are all publishers, you've got no problem.

They giggle a lot. Does that count?

 

[PatCarrington]

They giggle a lot. Does that count?

only if they're publishing junior prom applications.

 

[flyguy69]

They giggle a lot. Does that count?

Or you're writing limricks!