First Incest Story. What do you think?

[Blueeyes4u100]

Hi all! I thought I would use this story feedback section for the first time! Would love to make this section of forums as alive as some of the others again.

I wrote and posted my first story that has the taboo kink of incest as a main theme. I have other ones that I'm working on with this theme, including a part two to "Family Reunion", but I just was curious if I hit it hot enough or if I hit it too cringey.

Leave a link to a story you'd like feedback on as well!

https://literotica.com/s/family-reunion-22

A great first story

 

[HaralLuhhan]

*curtsies*

Thank you gentlemen. As I've said, constructive criticism definitely helps one become a better writer. My go-to for writing erotica has always been first person present tense, but I have done other. They both have had their place in success and failure for me. I suppose I will mark this one down as a failure, haha.

Anyway, y'all have given me lots to work with and grow from. I'll finish up the family reunion story as best I can, then start a new one with some of the advice I've been given from posting this thread.

I've seen plenty of stories on here that get both glowing praise and harsh criticism. It seems any story can find an audience, even ones each of us doesnt care for. So I wouldnt worry too much about whether to use present or past tense. There are people out there reading it regardless, which to me is the main thing

I recently published my first story on here, and got some very positive comments, hopefully I can maintain an audience over several chapters too

 

[SmokingFap]

Remember: we're all just amateurs, the same as you. None of us has won a Booker Prize or a Nobel. None of our opinions has inherently more merit than your own preference. So by all means consider our advice, but in the end do what works for you.

I won a Golden Penis once!



Actually, I bought it at a garage sale, but it's still cool.

 

[Chloe_Harper]

I appreciate the feedback and take it all with a grain of salt. I won't change my style too much, as then it won't be mine. I know I can't make everyone happy, but I do like knowing someone enjoys my stories.

Also, I would totally love to win a Golden Penis. What a fun find!

 

[richmondman]

GP lol

 

[StillStunned]

Time to get some edible paint and tell my wife she's won a prize!

 

[kevinj3636]

Damn Chloe. That was so amazing. Please tell me when it’s midnight

 

[Chloe_Harper]

Damn Chloe. That was so amazing. Please tell me when it’s midnight

Well, who's to stay nothing else fun happens before midnight?

 

[kevinj3636]

Well, who's to stay nothing else fun happens before midnight?

Please finish the story so I can finish…