First story with a male protagonist

Also liked part 2 although the premise of professionals overcome by lust is still highly unfeasible. Still, that's what fiction is for 😁

Thank you :) yeah, I mean I'm conscious that I'm definitely writing porn. I like to think of Sam as a fairly shy & withdrawn young man who is oblivious to the fact that he's living in a porno world.
 
Thank you :) yeah, I mean I'm conscious that I'm definitely writing porn. I like to think of Sam as a fairly shy & withdrawn young man who is oblivious to the fact that he's living in a porno world.
It's good porn though, with believable dialogue and characters and their reactions. I really did like how it built to the main event, ascending through the businesslike intro, Sam's shame at his own condition and involuntary rising excitement and being seduced by the (slightly evil?) woman.

As porn it had the desired effect of making me harder and more turned on as I read it, and wanting to read the climax.
 
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