First Story - would love feedback

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

I often allude to breast size with remarks about weight and body shape: Wanda wore her 200 pounds on her ass and thighs, and was heard to say of her breasts, MY BOYFRIEND ALWAYS SAYS THAT MORE THAN A MOUTHFUL IS WASTE. She had a perfect pear shape.

Another trick is humor, AS YOU CAN SEE, I'M LIVING PROOF THAT ANYTHING MORE THAN A MOUTHFUL IS WAIST.

 

[soflabbwlvr]

I don't have a problem with cup size. After all, that's the way people talk. But strap measurement doesn't really say anything about the boobs. If a woman is talking about herself, I don't mind. But when a man is talking, it makes no sense to me.

 

[stlgoddessfreya]

Bra Size

As someone who has breasts, yes, I can always tell when a writer either doesn't have them or doesn't know enough about them because they describe characters (or worse, have them describe themselves) with full band and cup size like that's all that needs to be said about a pair of breasts.

On the other hand, I think of my own breasts in terms of cup size because it's as much of an actual, quantitative size as any other clothing size and there's more size variation in varieties of apples than there is in breasts that will fit in a B-cup bra.

 

[cooterman64]

Finish.

 

[Bert_Fegg]

As someone who has breasts, yes, I can always tell when a writer either doesn't have them or doesn't know enough about them because they describe characters (or worse, have them describe themselves) with full band and cup size like that's all that needs to be said about a pair of breasts.

On the other hand, I think of my own breasts in terms of cup size because it's as much of an actual, quantitative size as any other clothing size and there's more size variation in varieties of apples than there is in breasts that will fit in a B-cup bra.

I have to say it's something of a turn off for me when somebody uses band and cup size as if it's any kind of description. It's something of a waste I think. Boobs are delicious things. They deserve a lot more than just a small/medium/large label, which is all a cup size really is. Apart from anything else it's something I can't really relate to. I mean three of my last four gf's had D cup breasts, but they were all very different. Loads has been said on this subject, but for me, as soon as I hear a bra size quoted in that context it just snaps me out of the story. I'd be happier if an author just alluded to the fact that their female character had breasts and left it at that. Either way I'm going to be filling the gap from my imagination.

 

[RawHumor]

I thought the story was hot, and I loved the reluctance mixed with the full on 'coming out' of her.

Is it autobiographical or purely fictional?

 

[stlgoddessfreya]

Nope, absolutely pure fiction.