First time gay sex (m/m, m/m/f, some bdsm)

[sr71plt]

Stop it before I get jealous.

Of him? No chance. His nose is brown from following me around the boards and putting his nose up where the sun don't shine.

 

[Hypoxia]

For the paragraph-slinger: I've mentioned this self-test elsewhere. Write your piece. Put it aside a few days, let it marinate and ferment. Now re-read it as if it was someone else's writing, not your own. Can you bear to read it? Do you REALLY think anyone else would want to get past the first paragraph? Hint: Start the story with something that grabs attention. "OH, FUCK ME, FUCK ME!" is always a promising beginning.

 

[Varian P]

After discovering (not that I'm surprised) that approximately 9,468 books have the title "Switch," I've decided to rename mine.

Also, I have an actual official cover image, now.

 

[Varian P]

Chapter three of Switch is up!

 

[Cruel2BKind]

Five-starred and faved the first chapter. Noice.

I might get back to the others, later, but I need to get some work done.

 

[BiTodd]

great erotica, right in my wheelhouse.

 

[Varian P]

Five-starred and faved the first chapter. Noice.

I might get back to the others, later, but I need to get some work done.

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed it.

 

[Varian P]

great erotica, right in my wheelhouse.

Thank you, I'm so pleased to hear it.

 

[Aynmair]

Any chance of Chapter 4 soon?

 

[robertreams]

I checked out the link and got only the cover.

 

[sr71plt]

I checked out the link and got only the cover.

What link did you check out? There are only two links referenced on this thread, to chapters two and three, and they both worked for me.

 

[Bettyspages]

Love it! Although I did find myself rushing through some parts to get to the good part.

I think they look too young in that picture. In my head they look older and straighter.