twelveoone
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Sorry to hear that, the word I used was:Algeria
byPhaonsBrother©
Concerning violence and spontaneity arisen in Duat,
Frantz Fanned the flame, psychiatrically
we two myselfs, fox and hounds,
have schizophrenic grammar, sharks and minnows,
a bomb left in the café,
little blood-shed the lining,
emergency contraceptive drugs
It was a good poem though, wasn't it? So much richer in story and imagery than:
A gaunt grey matador stands grand before the scorn
Of Venus venom formed, she so transmogrified,
I'm actually trans-mortified at your use of such a pedantic and non-poetic word as 'transmogrified'. 'Trans-mortify' meaning a shocked transgendered personage.
transmogrify (trænzˈmɒɡrɪˌfaɪ)
— vb , -fies , -fying , -fied
jocular ( tr ) to change or transform into a different shape, esp a grotesque or bizarre one
use of such a pedantic and non-poetic word as 'transmogrified
good enough for that crowe good enough for this crowe