Free Thoughts~on One word...

[My Erotic Tale]

It has been stated to me that any one any time can mention a NEW POEM read with a review or comment on the new poem review thread...(~_*)
and yours was delightful...and charming...good job

 

[RhymeFairy]

Thank You again My Friend ~!!

I had thought that was the case, then Eve wanted to know who was doing what days, so I thought that was a nice way of saying ... let them do it.

Good to know I was right, and also a lil confused.
I do not care how long peeps have been here ... we learn everyday.
Loose what we learn ... every moment.

*grins*

Thank you again ~

Me ~

 

[Jennifer C]

Have a word for today ...
Seems I have been using it all morning ...

Soapy

suds

sliding

bubbles


Take a pick .. or be adventurous,
try all ~

Hot water flowing
into ceramic heaven,
steam rising
as the tub fills
with jasmin scented bubbles.

Tired limbs lower,
water runeth over
heat envelopes me,
hair in wet spirals
succumb to relaxation.

 

[RhymeFairy]

cobwebs sticky, so irritably
clingy. like cotton candy,
on the mouth. licking so,
never getting it all off.

spiders dips down low,
attracting perilous prey
within dooms morbid home.

eight forks ... spoons
shoveling, suckling
slurping in majestic delight.

beady eyes, zeroing in.
down the hall, of all
is lost. venomous wrapping.
scrubbing, soft succulent flesh.

sharp fang straw slices. bringing
forth life's blood. bright future
beckons. drop for drop. neatly
nourishing, the eminent future.


lil spiders spring up, wrapping.
webbing their hated homes,
across life's open doorway ...





Think I can do something
with this ... might be good as is. Whatcha think?

 

[Jennifer C]

cobwebs sticky, so irritably
clingy. like cotton candy,
on the mouth. licking so,
never getting it all off.

spiders dips down low,
attracting perilous prey
within dooms morbid home.

eight forks ... spoons
shoveling, suckling
slurping in majestic delight.

beady eyes, zeroing in.
down the hall, of all
is lost. venomous wrapping.
scrubbing, soft succulent flesh.

sharp fang straw slices. bringing
forth life's blood. bright future
beckons. drop for drop. neatly
nourishing, the eminent future.


lil spiders spring up, wrapping.
webbing their hated homes,
across life's open doorway ...





Think I can do something
with this ... might be good as is. Whatcha think?

Yeah I think it has potential but it seems familliar, have you posted this before?

 

[RhymeFairy]

Yeah I think it has potential but it seems familliar, have you posted this before?

Yes. I had wrote it on the passion/writing live thread.
I like it was thinking of submitting. Just a thought ~

 

[RhymeFairy]

Loving Me ~

I keep returning to you, time
and time again. You feed my soul,
uplift my heart. Let me be the me,
I was from the start.

Whispering whispers, of
encouragement. Planting
my feet, upon the lighted path.
Helping turns, to understanding,
of all the things, I thought wrong.

Loving me as I am, not as you
wish I were. Abundantly it Is clear,
I am your gurl. Hold my heart
for safekeeping, my courageous
mystical muse.

Come, shower with me. Strip me
bare. Locking the door against
times steeling hands. We shall
take our time, to worship each
other. Sudsy soppy, musical slides,
two hearts heatedly entwine...

~~

This one kinda goes hand in hand with my
Day of Freedom poem to be posted/submitted
tomorrow on new poems.~


Wrote it on the muse thread me thinks.
I write so much and post them where
they stand. Like to have them here
so I can play with them as I wish, lol

 

[Jennifer C]

Yes. I had wrote it on the passion/writing live thread.
I like it was thinking of submitting. Just a thought ~

I thought I recognised it ~ It's a good thought hun, go with it...

 

[My Erotic Tale]

98 percent of us love your poetry...remember that
a couple of people have their nose pointed to high to see humble emotions in a write. I for one love your poems and know for a fact I am not the only one,,,<grin>

 

[Jennifer C]

98 percent of us love your poetry...remember that
a couple of people have their nose pointed to high to see humble emotions in a write. I for one love your poems and know for a fact I am not the only one,,,<grin>

We love your poetry RF don't let a few anonymous idiots get to ya ~ they aint worth the bother!

Love ya hun....

 

[LeBroz]

And Furthermore, Let Me Add..................

I keep returning to you, time
and time again. You feed my soul,
uplift my heart. Let me be the me,
I was from the start.

Whispering whispers, of
encouragement. Planting
my feet, upon the lighted path.
Helping turns, to understanding,
of all the things, I thought wrong.

Loving me as I am, not as you
wish I were. Abundantly it is clear,
I am your girl. Hold my heart
for safekeeping, my courageous
mystical muse.

Come, shower with me. Strip me
bare. Locking the door against
time's stealing hands. We shall
take our time, to worship each
other. Sudsy soppy(sp?), musical slides, {or soapy?}
two hearts heatedly entwine...

~~

This one kinda goes hand in hand with my
Day of Freedom poem to be posted/submitted
tomorrow on new poems.~

Your Day of Freedom was nice but not anywhere near as much fun as Liquid Euphoria; and we were having sooooo much fun with that one with the pc's 'til that creature turned up with all her bad vibes; bad, bad, bad, so bad; and can't even spell pretentious.

Pssst ~ just a couple things I noticed on your little verse above - was that sopping (as in sop) or did you really mean to say soapy?

Art & JC had their say, so now let me add another 2¢ worth:

You do write well and from deep within the heart; you bare your soul for all to see. Some days you're off and on others I'm off {not that kind of off! }; and your verse just won't connect. Stay true to your vision and share your being; let others construct pompous pretentious verbose structures that say nothing and are devoid of soul.

 

[RhymeFairy]

Quote = We all love ya

*Grins



A lil Thank you from me ... to you ~!!!!



Another long week. Here
at the start. Wanna write
tell ya'll about my singing
heart. Shower you, with life's
gifts of friendship and love.

Then those bluesy blues
sneak in. Tippn' over this
hummin' heart ... again.

Fog chimes in, telling
her tales of lonliness
and woe.

Steam ... rain, storms
on tha way. No more
time to play. Seeking
shelter, in the arms
of Happily Ever After.


...

It hits home, when all seems
to have gone wrong. All is well,
it will be fine. Everything will
come ... in time. It is great
to come here ... Home. To find
shelter, in your arms ... of love.
Feeling no longer ... so alone~

 

[Jennifer C]

Quote = We all love ya

*Grins



A lil Thank you from me ... to you ~!!!!



Another long week. Here
at the start. Wanna write
tell ya'll about my singing
heart. Shower you, with life's
gifts of friendship and love.

Then those bluesy blues
sneak in. Tippn' over this
hummin' heart ... again.

Fog chimes in, telling
her tales of lonliness
and woe.

Steam ... rain, storms
on tha way. No more
time to play. Seeking
shelter, in the arms
of Happily Ever After.


...

It hits home, when all seems
to have gone wrong. All is well,
it will be fine. Everything will
come ... in time. It is great
to come here ... Home. To find
shelter, in your arms ... of love.
Feeling no longer ... so alone~

Beautifully said my friend...

 

[RhymeFairy]

Hi ya Peeps ......

Checkin in to let ya'll know I am around.
Again a real busy week for me.
Hope ya'll are doin ok, and all is well ~

How about a few poems on ....

The Ride ??????

So whatcha waitin on?
What/Who do you like to ride?

cars
wagons
hay rides
bus
planes
veggies
lovers
blow up dolls
faces
hoods
wet n slides
chairs
elevators
bulls
horses-cows-animals


Tell me whats on your mind??



I'll be chckin back in ~

 

[RhymeFairy]

The Ride~



Not a peep to be heard.
Sound sleeps ... Tongues
travel long ... wet roads.
Leading ... Dancing.
Showing me, the flow.

I shall be good ... for a few.
Then your in trouble Mister.
I'm gonna jump on your kisser.
Grind ... wiggle to my hearts
delight. Take you away, fairy
wings for flight.

Round ... Round. Head spins,
slides. Give you all we have
suppressed. Take what I want.
Spread you out. Fill your hole,
as my hips ... They roll.

My mouth so full. Hard strokes
slide. Shouts from you. From our
Lil ride. Take what I offer. Leave
not a drop. Cause next time
my love, YOU are on top ~!!





You HAD to know, I could NOT resist ... Right~

*Kisses*

 

[annaswirls]

the ride

it was always on a full stomach that we left the Butterwecks
birthdays, thanksgiving
Dad never slowed down for the moguls
all the way down Gerryville Pike. Eyes closed, partly to stop the nausea from presenting itself
partly because the humm of the motor
backseat sleepy silent
and my parents
with their muted after party analysis
what did she mean by that
no, he doesn;t look healthy
are they coming down this year
to do taxes

Jennifer needs braces.


four times a year, that ride
maybe five
close my eyes
I am there

 

[RhymeFairy]

Hold me up, shake me down.
Cuffed to the bed, will keep
you bound. Long feather
flick, smooches your dick.

To treat those lil nipples
of yours. I have lots of
pins ... pinches, in store.

Hot chocolate drapes down
trembling, teasing thighs. Just
begging me to kiss, till you rise.

Soulful screams of longings duet.
Sharing with you, my wondrous
delight. Pounding slams, shocking
the bindes. Knowing I shall be repaid
for ALL my crimes.

Bending you double. Filling me up.
Taking all, from your hard brimmed
cup. Small sudden smacks to that
Hot ass of yours. Slamming you
into my hot ... Wet cores.

Double our fun. Nothing left undone.
Taking ... giving, we play and have fun.
Together we now ride. Fiendishly we
Roar. Nothing from the other we hide.
As we both know the score.

Love you Baby, My one Hot Stud.
Now come back here, and give me
some more of your love ~

 

[RhymeFairy]

say nothing
listen to what I ask,
tell of our love ... us.

show me love, hold my hand
wipe these scalding tears,
from my eyes. Never
let go ... of us.

do I ask too much?
never show ... enough?
tell you what I want,
no I do not ... No,
not enough.

I never say, how it feels
to see your smile, feel
your gaze on a warm
sunny morn. to bring
you coffee, for the rest
of our days Yes, that's
what I want.

slow kisses, snuggled
deep in bed warm sensual
slides, legs ... thighs
giggles of laughter, hot
passionate love ... Blazing.
heart to heart. eyes locking,
bodies ... one.

every breath, is for you.
my soul, lonesome, withering
in anguish for what could
should have been.

step back in time. revisit
our courtship. slowly walk
to the end of that
"what we once had" road.

we are not over. Never
will that day come. I will not
allow you, to give up, on Us.
Unless,
it is what
you truly want.

 

[My Erotic Tale]

say nothing
listen to what I ask,
tell of our love ... us.

show me love, hold my hand
wipe these scalding tears,
from my eyes. Never
let go ... of us.

do I ask too much?
never show ... enough?
tell you what I want,
no I do not ... No,
not enough.

I never say, how it feels
to see your smile, feel
your gaze on a warm
sunny morn. to bring
you coffee, for the rest
of our days Yes, that's
what I want.

slow kisses, snuggled
deep in bed warm sensual
slides, legs ... thighs
giggles of laughter, hot
passionate love ... Blazing.
heart to heart. eyes locking,
bodies ... one.

every breath, is for you.
my soul, lonesome, withering
in anguish for what could
should have been.

step back in time. revisit
our courtship. slowly walk
to the end of that
"what we once had" road.

we are not over. Never
will that day come. I will not
allow you, to give up, on Us.
Unless,
it is what
you truly want.

you are a muse fairy too <grin>

 

[Jennifer C]

say nothing
listen to what I ask,
tell of our love ... us.

show me love, hold my hand
wipe these scalding tears,
from my eyes. Never
let go ... of us.

do I ask too much?
never show ... enough?
tell you what I want,
no I do not ... No,
not enough.

I never say, how it feels
to see your smile, feel
your gaze on a warm
sunny morn. to bring
you coffee, for the rest
of our days Yes, that's
what I want.

slow kisses, snuggled
deep in bed warm sensual
slides, legs ... thighs
giggles of laughter, hot
passionate love ... Blazing.
heart to heart. eyes locking,
bodies ... one.

every breath, is for you.
my soul, lonesome, withering
in anguish for what could
should have been.

step back in time. revisit
our courtship. slowly walk
to the end of that
"what we once had" road.

we are not over. Never
will that day come. I will not
allow you, to give up, on Us.
Unless,
it is what
you truly want.

RF this is a magical piece you have here. You touched my heart with this beautiful poem.

Thank you my friend...

 

[RhymeFairy]

Sins Dessert

lay me down. shadow
kiss my hills. caress
my wants. pray, for
deliverance.

spoon slap, my
gluttonous need.
razzle, my sizzle,
of sultry sins.

ride till the dawn
breaks. slow trot
this horse of
pulpous pulp.

make me beg for
release. scream
for more. come
inside me, cum.

drink the sin from my
lips, of lechery. taste
my juice, of jasmine
jelly. lick, till you drop.

share with me, your
wickedly wondrous
treasure. feel me
cum, as I have you.

then, taste yet again.
tongue feed me.
lapping up longings,
overdraft of opium,
within sins dessert.

 

[CharleyH]

Hi ya peeps.

I have been thinking. (Hmm just a lil think I oft do~ although I do try not to do it too often...)
Why don't we do a free thoughts post? What I have found in my time back here at Lit. is that I am going through the threads and looking for inspiration.
I love to read and get inspiration from others post and thoughts. Sometimes it's just one word that will jump out. Then I kinda go crazy with that~ till I write it all out.

For instance: today's word~~ Temple

Can ya just *see* it.
All the thoughts that go through the mind with that one lil word.

Thanks for lettin' me ramble,
Now I am gonna *play* with my new lil word.
WooHooo~

RhymeFairy~

Did you not have a thread like this somewhere? Why did you not bump it?

 

[ruminator]

Did you not have a thread like this somewhere? Why did you not bump it?

Can bump be the one word free thought?

It conjures a wide variety of images.

 

[CharleyH]

Can bump be the one word free thought?

It conjures a wide variety of images.

I most certainly don't see a problem LOL. But ask RF or just start posting?

I am WAY too sarcastic after my pendulum post I would just, well ... I won't say ... LOL Go ahead and bump away? Can you bump enough, though? LOL (duality rules!)

 

[RhymeFairy]

Did you not have a thread like this somewhere? Why did you not bump it?

I Bumpppp everything my friends, lol.

Nah, this is, my only thread.
Others might have started one like it, have no clue.

As for posting ... bumping.
PLEASE feel free to do as you wish ...
I could use a foot maggage if ya interested? ...* Grins~WEG*

Thank Ya'll for the interest ~



edited to addd~~ My Badd ...
I do have another thread ... BDSM * Tie Me Up *
*grins n giggles* ... nothing like this one ...