~~Haiku River~~

[My Erotic Trail]

there is a love
watching the river roll by
a current of feelings

 

[bluerains]

there is a love
watching the river roll by
a current of feelings

beneath rainless clouds
succulent bodies wilting
fiery river scorched

 

[Sex and Death]

I like that...


A Praying Mantis
in silent prayer and still
in a frog's mouth

firefly! -
a north star in the dark
of a cat's mouth

 

[Sex and Death]

beneath rainless clouds
succulent bodies wilting
fiery river scorched

tangled wet legs -
dew pooling cool
in valleys

 

[bluerains]

tangled wet legs -
dew pooling cool
in valleys

dense shadows
hidden moonshine
valley lush

 

[drown]

the pollution here!

a choice to take fish from the:

colon
or
the bay

LOS ANGELES
april ~ early '06​

 

[My Erotic Trail]

the pollution here!

a choice to take fish from the:

colon
or
the bay

LOS ANGELES
april ~ early '06​

a swift river
to a smog filled bay
again today

 

[Sex and Death]

dense shadows
hidden moonshine
valley lush

rosebud opens in shadow -
stalk of jade penetrates

 

[Sex and Death]

a swift river
to a smog filled bay
again today

happy polymer jug -
no hands left to raise it
or mouths to drink

 

[Sex and Death]

the pollution here!

a choice to take fish from the:

colon
or
the bay

LOS ANGELES
april ~ early '06​

desperate man
washing white towels
with dirty hands

 

[bluerains]

happy polymer jug -
no hands left to raise it
or mouths to drink

catch basin ashen
accumulation’s silent death
after the tides shook

 

[My Erotic Trail]

catch basin ashen
accumulation’s silent death
after the tides shook

a ship sails
the river's gentle flow
from within a bottle

 

[Sex and Death]

catch basin ashen
accumulation’s silent death
after the tides shook

Hiroshima --
thermal rays --
human shadow left on stone steps

 

[Sex and Death]

a ship sails
the river's gentle flow
from within a bottle

uke and nage -
enemies -
force of love - tenkan


(Inspired by a blending of your poem and your AV...I am a student of aikijustsu, aikido, and iaido.)

 

[My Erotic Trail]

uke and nage -
enemies -
force of love - tenkan


(Inspired by a blending of your poem and your AV...I am a student of aikijustsu, aikido, and iaido.)

Japanesse forms,
very admirable
I have studied Judo and Aikido, I teach Korean styles of Moo Duk Kwan, Soo Bak Do, Tang Soo Do and Tae Kwon Do.


Sa Ba Nim
My Journey of the body
vessel of the soul

 

[bluerains]

spring’s gentle showers
april c*ming warm and wet
winter’s leftovers

 

[My Erotic Trail]

spring’s gentle showers
apirl c*ming warm and wet
winter’s leftovers

spanish moss
hangs from old oaks
along the river

 

[bluerains]

Japanesse forms,
very admirable
I have studied Judo and Aikido, I teach Korean styles of Moo Duk Kwan, Soo Bak Do, Tang Soo Do and Tae Kwon Do.


Sa Ba Nim
My Journey of the body
vessel of the soul

cross the rubicon
with unicorn wing flutters
unchained by the thrust

 

[MyNecroticSnail]

Japanesse forms,
very admirable
I have studied Judo and Aikido, I teach Korean styles of Moo Duk Kwan, Soo Bak Do, Tang Soo Do and Tae Kwon Do.


Sa Ba Nim
My Journey of the body
vessel of the soul

Wow, I suppose these teaching skills you transfer over to poetry?

Like one person had said, "it doesn't take but reading a couple of a poets poems to figure out rather they write intelligent or simple poetry. From reading that link, it seems there are a lot of both.

What good does it do, to get your own interpretation of anothers write if it is not correct?

Or what good does knowing the form do, if you never figure out the reason and the possibilities of that form.
But I guess that just may be too complex to grasp.

 

[My Erotic Trail]

wild grapes
wither on the vine
in due time

 

[Sex and Death]

wild grapes
wither on the vine
in due time

burned out bulb -
am I the spent filament
or the energy source?

 

[My Erotic Trail]

burned out bulb -
am I the spent filament
or the energy source?

a simple candle
illuminates ones world
with a tiny light

 

[bluerains]

a simple candle
illuminates ones world
with a tiny light

churning up seashells
walking thru scented lagoon
being source of now

 

[My Erotic Trail]

churning up seashells
walking thru scented lagoon
being source of now

along the shore
of a slow moving river
I see the Dew

 

[bluerains]

along the shore
of a slow moving river
I see the Dew

projector

purely professing
life’s series of simple breaths
realizing ought