Hard Landing - Discussion Thread/AMA/Yell At Me

[BrokenSpokes]

Chapter 06

Hello friend, happy Saturday.

I just want to let you know that Chapter 06 will be up on the site for you to read tomorrow.

Thanks for your patience.

 

[Navels]

Hello friend, happy Saturday.

I just want to let you know that Chapter 06 will by up on the site for you to read tomorrow.

Thanks for your patience.

Hooray! Looking forward to it.

 

[BrokenSpokes]

It's here

Chapter Six is finally up. My deepest apologies, friend, for how long it took me. Grad school, life, Google docs... you know how things are.

Please enjoy, and let leave a comment to let me know what you think.

Hard Landing - Chapter 6

 

[Wrexscar]

This is a review page.
I'm writing about the latest chapter.
SPOILERS



Called it.
I had guessed she would live but lose her foot.
Wasn't expecting the coma.
I knew someone as complex as Jo would have major emotional issues.
Although I had expected her to go full independant In a way blaiming the crash on being involved with Jill.

I love the charactors you have created here. I love that in a way they are so rounded I can guess how they will react.

If I have an issue, it is with how perfect Jill is. She has a lot of her own baggage but it never comes out in a negative way. I"d like for her to mess up at least once so that their is some balence in the relationship.

 

[Navels]

Enjoyed this greatly! Very well done.

I'm being ridiculous, but I can't not say it. There's a Jaleo in Bethesda. No need to go all the way into DC for the best food and sangria around! Damn, now I want patatas bravas and bacon wrapped dates!

Looking forward to what comes next in this series and, I hope, others too. I love the local feel!

 

[BrokenSpokes]

Jaleo’s is life

Enjoyed this greatly! Very well done.

I'm being ridiculous, but I can't not say it. There's a Jaleo in Bethesda. No need to go all the way into DC for the best food and sangria around! Damn, now I want patatas bravas and bacon wrapped dates!

Looking forward to what comes next in this series and, I hope, others too. I love the local feel!

This is 100% true, also in Pentagon City. But I go to the Jaleo’s in Chinatown for my dates, therefore, so does Jill.

Don’t forget the cod and potato fritters!

 

[Navels]

Jaleo Chinatown is a special place for me too!
Will definitely check out the cod next time I'm there.

 

[Wrexscar]

So can i ask how the last chapter is going?

In progress?
Editing?

Or is (as so happens to me) your muse off making daisy chains?

 

[BrokenSpokes]

So can i ask how the last chapter is going?

In progress?
Editing?

Or is (as so happens to me) your muse off making daisy chains?

Chapter 07 is with my editor. I don’t believe he’s started on it yet, he just got it yesterday.

It will not be the last chapter.

 

[Wrexscar]

Chapter 07 is with my editor. I don’t believe he’s started on it yet, he just got it yesterday.

It will not be the last chapter.

Thanks this makes me doubly happy.

A chapter soonish and more to follow

 

[BrokenSpokes]

Chapter 07

Friend, just posting a note here that I have submitted Chapter 07 and it will be up for your reading pleasure as soon as the valiant and faithful site editors can work through their backlog to post it.

 

[Wrexscar]

Friend, just posting a note here that I have submitted Chapter 07 and it will be up for your reading pleasure as soon as the valiant and faithful site editors can work through their backlog to post it.

Excited.

I think I've checked the site at least 3 times a day since you posted that.

 

[LesDesirable]

Impatiently waiting for Chap. 07.

tap, tap, tap, tap, tap, tap, tap, . . .

tap.

 

[BrokenSpokes]

Impatiently waiting for Chap. 07.

tap, tap, tap, tap, tap, tap, tap, . . .

tap.

You and me both, LD.

 

[BrokenSpokes]

Chapter 7 is up

Hello friend. Chapter Seven has posted, please enjoy.

https://www.literotica.com/s/hard-landing-ch-07

 

[scumbag]

Oh My

So good

 

[LesDesirable]

Well done again. Now you need to expand your repertoire with a completely unrelated story using characters in whom you have not yet invested. Just so I (we?) can see if you are very good, or just very good at what you know.

 

[BrokenSpokes]

Well done again. Now you need to expand your repertoire with a completely unrelated story using characters in whom you have not yet invested. Just so I (we?) can see if you are very good, or just very good at what you know.

Stand by for my Holiday Story, dropping this weekend.

 

[scumbag]

Stand by for my Holiday Story, dropping this weekend.

Loved it and I hope you win.

I know you said it was a one off, but so many ways to take it!
Lawyers against Steve and Amanda, how they develop, how Megan and Caitlyn get on. Maybe marriage and continuing a family after Meagn finishes law.
So many options, I hope you continue it and yes gave it 5 stars.

 

[Rain29nsleep12]

Pacing myself

I discovered this great story last week and have been pacing myself. On one hand, I want to know how the story unfolds, on the other hand, I want to slowly savour it. You write so well!!
Who needs porn when your writing conjure images inside the readers head so vividly.

 

[BrokenSpokes]

Chapter 8 has been published

Hello friend. Just a note to let you know that Chapter 8 has been published. Merry Christmas, from me to you.

Enjoy, and leave a comment if you care to.

Hard Landing, Chapter 8

 

[Wrexscar]

I left you a review but posted it without checking I was logged in but basically I just want to say thank you.