Hen party delights

[sirhugs]

Dancing Bear was great, if you need a bachelorette party idea check them out if they are still online.

 

[Lucy_Lastic]

Or are you saying that this is normal behavior with women with male strippers? Because if a guy acted that way in a strip club, he'd wake up in the parking lot with a concussion. You do not touch the dancers!

It's not abnormal. Dancing bear type stuff exaggerates, but that stuff happens.

It's different to men with female strippers. Female strippers are different to male strippers. Girls in strip clubs are generally there because it's easy money, not because it's a place to get laid. They're usually bored by their clientelle and the last thing they want is some drunk guy putting their paws on them.

Male strippers I think see it as a bonus, as would you if random women wanted to grab your dick.

 

[soflabbwlvr]

Or are you saying that this is normal behavior with women with male strippers? Because if a guy acted that way in a strip club, he'd wake up in the parking lot with a concussion. You do not touch the dancers!

Depends on the club. I've been in strip clubs that had a strict 6 ft. rule (no one allowed within 6 ft. of a dancer), others where full penetrative sex occurred, and everything in between. I once got a hand job from a dancer while sitting at the bar. It varies from state to state, city to city, and even club to club. Generally speaking, the darker the lighting in the club the more that is permitted. I have also found that fewer customers in a club correlates with more permissiveness, so long as the customer is spending money.
Never been to a strip club for women, but based on the videos I've seen the atmosphere is completely different. More of a party, less transactional.

 

[SteelPoint]

I've been on several hen nights. On not a single one has getting raped up an alley figured on anyone's list of must-haves.
PLEASE don't promote rape as a good thing.

Trust me. Being out at night as a woman is very different to being a man because we have to be constantly aware of ewnvironment, who's around, how drunk we are, how drunk they are... You don't have to do a risk assessment every time you turn a corner.

Hen nights are fun. Many times everyone goes out with the intention of getting laid, or at the very least getting the bride laid. Dont spoil it by adding rape in there.

Hello mods. Can we please have this post transferred back to the Irrelevant Moralising board? It seems to have slipped somehow through to this thread where it has no business being.

 

[AlinaX]

It's not irrelevant. Rape can be made erotic without promoting it as a good thing.

 

[SteelPoint]

It IS irrelevant as the OP has NOT remotely "promoted it as a good thing". He/she has simply suggested it could form one of the sub-plots:

"Perhaps one would be an ultra-loyal, loving wife whose fate is to be dragged into a dark alley when trying to get home after the party on this dark, rainy night... and ends up loving every minute."

Just where's the "promotion", pray? It's being mooted as a possible event in a fictional story where a particular fictional character has a particular reaction to it. End of. You want to get rid of the entire Lit. NC section? Go and do battle with Manu/Laurel.

 

[AlinaX]

Given that Manu/Laurel insist that non-con ends in enjoyment for all, which in itself is highly problematic, the line between rape and getting dragged into an alley for an eventual good time is fuzzy indeed.

One person's erotic non-con fantasy is another's rape trigger, so it is a delicate subject. It's fair for Lucy to make that point, and it's fair for you to ignore it. Why exactly your knickers are in a twist, I can only guess.

 

[NewOldGuy77]

I get that it's triggering, but I suspect that no reader of Literotica fiction comes away convinced that non-consensual r*pe is acceptable in real life.

 

[AlinaX]

I hope not.

 

[Bubo_bubo]

I get that it's triggering, but I suspect that no reader of Literotica fiction comes away convinced that non-consensual r*pe is acceptable in real life.

Probably.
That doesn't mean that Lucy_Lastic's point is without merit, and that reacting to it as Steelpoint did (invoking the mods, calling it irrelevant moralising) is at best a bit iffy.

 

[SteelPoint]

Given that Manu/Laurel insist that non-con ends in enjoyment for all, which in itself is highly problematic, the line between rape and getting dragged into an alley for an eventual good time is fuzzy indeed.

One person's erotic non-con fantasy is another's rape trigger, so it is a delicate subject. It's fair for Lucy to make that point, and it's fair for you to ignore it. Why exactly your knickers are in a twist, I can only guess.

Nope, it's dear Lucy's which are thoroughly knotted. It was she who made the irrelevant comment and I merely reacted. This is a site about FICTION, for God's sake. There are all kinds of things on here which are reprehensible/illegal in RL. Violence against the person, theft, you name it.That does not mean we are not allowed to write about them as fiction. Still less does it mean that we can't even mention them for fear of some moraliser sanctimoniously preaching us into silence because mentioning of course means "promoting". Yes, right...

Absolutely ridiculous.

 

[AlinaX]

Blah.

~ (actively resists rising to the bait) ~

 

[sirhugs]

Blah.

~ (actively resists rising to the bait) ~

always good to live to spawn another day.

 

[SteelPoint]

Blah.

~ (actively resists rising to the bait) ~

No bait. Just irrefutable facts and hence your childish non-response.

 

[NewOldGuy77]

To get the thread back on track: The women start the evening by having dinner at a fancy restaurant with valet parking garage. One forgets her purse in the car, asks the cute valet to help her retrieve it. He takes her to the car, where she ends up giving him a bj as a tip.

 

[sirhugs]

To get the thread back on track: The women start the evening by having dinner at a fancy restaurant with valet parking garage. One forgets her purse in the car, asks the cute valet to help her retrieve it. He takes her to the car, where she ends up giving him a bj as a tip.

good start

 

[Magineer]

I've gone away and started something vaguely along the lines of the OP's idea. What I keep coming up against is the difficulty of maintaining a consistent central story while 'branching off' to cover the separate sub-stories. There's a lot of work involved in this to keep 'continuity', as TV and films would call it, from being disrupted.

 

[NegateGivity]

I've gone away and started something vaguely along the lines of the OP's idea. What I keep coming up against is the difficulty of maintaining a consistent central story while 'branching off' to cover the separate sub-stories. There's a lot of work involved in this to keep 'continuity', as TV and films would call it, from being disrupted.

Then just focus on a few characters. You can always break it up into multiple chapters focusing on different characters. I say follow one thread to the end.
Adding more ingredients to the soup doesn't automatically make it better. Quality over quantity.

 

[Bubo_bubo]

I've gone away and started something vaguely along the lines of the OP's idea. What I keep coming up against is the difficulty of maintaining a consistent central story while 'branching off' to cover the separate sub-stories. There's a lot of work involved in this to keep 'continuity', as TV and films would call it, from being disrupted.

I might have a framing device that bypasses the central story a little, you can take it or leave it.

A few weeks after the hen party the women find themselves at the bride's house for a little get-together. After a few glasses of white wine, tongues get loose and one after another they confess what they did that night.

It removes the need to get into too much detail about the hen party itself and also any need to tell the stories in chronological order. You can go from least salacious to most salacious.

 

[NewOldGuy77]

@Bubo_bubo you’re a damned GENIUS, this is perfect! Somebody write this sucker!

I might have a framing device that bypasses the central story a little, you can take it or leave it.

 

[Lucy_Lastic]

Nope, it's dear Lucy's which are thoroughly knotted.

Not at all. I offered a different perspective, I don't expect anyone to change what they write just because I have an opinion on the reality of a situation.

Absolutely ridiculous.

You got that part right.

 

[Magineer]

Someone on this thread has all the indignant bluster trademarks of having been found out.

 

[Magineer]

Then just focus on a few characters. You can always break it up into multiple chapters focusing on different characters. I say follow one thread to the end.
Adding more ingredients to the soup doesn't automatically make it better. Quality over quantity.

Yes, and that is why my own preferred format is short stories... and all the more reason why trying to squeeze even only a 'few characters' into such a genre becomes well-nigh impossible. The multi-chaptered epic exponent will have little understanding of this. I concede fully that a longer story would tend to be more suitable here, but I shall keep on thinking of a possible solution. Eagle Owl's suggestion would still work out far too long for my purposes.

 

[RoperTrace]

I've been on several hen nights. On not a single one has getting raped up an alley figured on anyone's list of must-haves.
PLEASE don't promote rape as a good thing.

Trust me. Being out at night as a woman is very different to being a man because we have to be constantly aware of ewnvironment, who's around, how drunk we are, how drunk they are... You don't have to do a risk assessment every time you turn a corner.

Hen nights are fun. Many times everyone goes out with the intention of getting laid, or at the very least getting the bride laid. Dont spoil it by adding rape in there.

I was thinking the same, but glad you brought it up.

 

[NegateGivity]

Yes, and that is why my own preferred format is short stories... and all the more reason why trying to squeeze even only a 'few characters' into such a genre becomes well-nigh impossible. The multi-chaptered epic exponent will have little understanding of this. I concede fully that a longer story would tend to be more suitable here, but I shall keep on thinking of a possible solution. Eagle Owl's suggestion would still work out far too long for my purposes.

So do vignettes on the central theme. It was Sarah's Hen night, here's what Alice did. Next here's what Becky and Sue did. etc. etc.
It doesn't have do be Grande, just different adventures splintered off from a central event. Unless you are planning to weave all the separate adventures together, just make them each woman's adventure.

If you are making an intertwined story then just write out a timeline for yourself.
i.e. When Sarah is doing this, Alice is here, Becky and Sue are here.
Also just making a little map helps to keep track of proximity.