butters
High on a Hill
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The river bed's too bright for weary souls;
Come, rest your head upon my breast. Repose
Shall find you as my heart's own beat
Will softly sing your drowsing thoughts to sleep.
or: Will softly drum your drowsy thoughts to sleep
or: Will softly drum your drowsing thoughts to sleep
which last line to use? and that's why i couldn't get back to sleep myself - birds, the dawg, annoyingly aching shoulder, and then a damned poem decides it wants to 'out there'. pfft.
Come, rest your head upon my breast. Repose
Shall find you as my heart's own beat
Will softly sing your drowsing thoughts to sleep.
or: Will softly drum your drowsy thoughts to sleep
or: Will softly drum your drowsing thoughts to sleep
which last line to use? and that's why i couldn't get back to sleep myself - birds, the dawg, annoyingly aching shoulder, and then a damned poem decides it wants to 'out there'. pfft.