I've tried to read a few of the 'New' stories over the last few days.

[Bazzle]

But as we saw in the "Rip Me To Shreds" thread, what one person considers clunky is another person's descriptive style, and that person might find the first person's barebones narrative flat and overly simple.

We are all here looking for different things?

I really struggle to read scifi and incest. It just doesnt do anything for me.

But to others however badly its written its the best thing since sliced bread.

I get the art of these things too.

Hey ho. I will keep trying and ultimately failing

B

 

[TheWritingGroup]

That one is not mine, but thing is...some of us are dyslexic, and unless Word or Goggle docs tell you there is problem, you can read it five times and still miss the clunky sentence structure.

Some people have reported that having software read the words aloud helps. I'd think that would be especially useful for a person with dyslexia, since it skips the whole visual recognition part.

-Rocco

 

[Bazzle]

Some people have reported that having software read the words aloud helps. I'd think that would be especially useful for a person with dyslexia, since it skips the whole visual recognition part.

-Rocco

Yes, I have a logistics problem to doing that, but I keep meaning to try it

 

[TheLobster]

some of us are dyslexic, and unless Word or Goggle docs tell you there is problem,

I see what you did there.

 

[burgwad]

Guess what happened over night!!!

No way. I want to believe. But let's give it another few hours. Meanwhile, I shall keep praying for Charli.

What do you mean by "write weirdly"?
Subject matter? Ignoring standard grammar?

Sort of!

 

[Sappho_CGN]

I got few complaints that my stories leave impression that I’m not fluent in English. It is because I, surprise-surprise, am not fluent in English

I don’t get a chance to discuss sex novels in professional environment of my daily life (sadly!), and hiring tutors for the sake of becoming a better unpaid porn writer seems like an unwise investment.

I’m very much open to readers pointing out flaws in my texts, and I dream of a great editor, who would descend from the skies one day and offer help. So far it hasn’t happened yet, so all I can do is to proceed as-is to the best of my abilities.

Here are users who help you on a voluntary and unpaid/non-commercial basis. The translations of my 2 German stories were made firstly by me and the help of the Google translator as my English is not good enough and were then reviewed by a (very) nice guy. As it is his hobby he needed two weeks but I am (very) fine with that and according to a comment, his English is very good.