bronzeage
I am a river to my people
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When I edit I take into account the writer's skill level. If the writer is good I only suggest, and in red so it stands out, in this manner, in brackets, such as:
[their words/s - my suggested replacement].
But with weaker writers I just make the edits for them, allow them to go back and review to see what I have written as an example as to how they might learn.
There are no hard or fast rules, but I find myself adapting to the situation on a case by case basis. The writers I have worked with seem to appreciate this approach to date.
If in doubt, communicate with the writer and ask what they are looking for. And by all means keep writers updated every few days, they are in the dark about the progress being made.
Just my two cents -- adjusted for inflation, with tax -- maybe more like twenty bucks!
I will send a story back if there are major plot flaws, with instructions to correct. Even in erotic fantasy, there are certain physical impossibilities.
One cannot increase the amount a man ejaculates by squeezing his testicles. It might be fun if it worked, but in a story, it's kind of a mood breaker. Some stories, at least.
Once we have settled, who did what to who, and how, I can do a line by line edit.