Lesbian sex

[Bowtothequeen]

One word of advice... Use the SPACEBAR between your sentences.

I do use it. Maybe it's whatever you are connecting from that has problems.

 

[MyRubiLips]

I do use it. Maybe it's whatever you are connecting from that has problems.

Each post of yours before this one had no space between the sentences.

 

[Bowtothequeen]

One word of advice... Use the SPACEBAR between your sentences.

i do use it.maybe it's your device that does not show the space between my words

 

[Bowtothequeen]

Each post of yours before this one had no space between the sentences.

don't know what to tell you.i use it,what sense would it make to not use it.

 

[RoyceConnors]

You might enjoy Masters of Lavender Hill Mansion. It's a lesbian ghost story with a kinky twist.

 

[MyRubiLips]

i do use it.maybe it's your device that does not show the space between my words

Not your words, your sentences.

 

[subserviant]

Every bodys sentences and words look fine to me

 

[TxRad]

Every bodys sentences and words look fine to me

Hers have no capitals and no spaces after the punctuation. All but one post that is.

 

[MyRubiLips]

Hers have no capitals and no spaces after the punctuation. All but one post that is.

I'm glad to know I'm not going insane.

 

[Bowtothequeen]

Hers have no capitals and no spaces after the punctuation. All but one post that is.

say,you go to all threads,commenting on stuff pretty irrelevant to the thread,or misinterpret it completly,or is just me?now that we established i know it is a erotic site thus having sex,what is bothering you is the space between my sentences?i write how i write,i'm not going for a nobel prize in literature,just started a thread,and everybody seems to read it just fine,since is the content that is important.please if you don't like what or how is written,just move on from it.

 

[sr71plt]

It's just you. This is a writing site, and your writing on the forum is substandard, so you shouldn't be surprised having it pointed out to you on a writing site. You seem to be a reader rather than a writer, so it's no big deal in writing the way you do on the forum. But if you're not being literate--and you're not--it's no surprise that that is pointed out to you on a writing site. And do remember that you came here asking for help. Your attitude won't get you much help here.

 

[jonyoungau]

my favorite lesbian stories are lesbian anal, with either girl rim job or girl strap on. basically anything with a girl getting something in her ass. oww and lesbian exhibitionists and nudists their fun too

 

[Bowtothequeen]

It's just you. This is a writing site, and your writing on the forum is substandard, so you shouldn't be surprised having it pointed out to you on a writing site. You seem to be a reader rather than a writer, so it's no big deal in writing the way you do on the forum. But if you're not being literate--and you're not--it's no surprise that that is pointed out to you on a writing site. And do remember that you came here asking for help. Your attitude won't get you much help here.

i was polite in my asking for help,i thanked all who post their stories,ther was no attitude,it started when someone else came with a bad attitude on something i posted and misinterprted it.i was polite to anyone who was polite with me,thanked everyone wo bothere to read,and would have thanked anyone who politely showed me my mistakes. But if someone already armed with bad attitude leaves a comment i wont be saying thank you or be polite myself. no i am not a writer,not would dare to judge someone's writing style i simply stated there is a lack of sex sex that isn't oral,and was not searching for any trouble nor bashing any writer. or like you and three other here just being very condescending and then accusing me of bad attitude.

 

[MyRubiLips]

Never once was I condecending or accusing you of being rude. Near the bottom of page one you said you were going to write a story, too. I offered genuine advice. On this literary web site, the owners will deny your story if you wrote in the same fashion.

It's not my fault you went off.

 

[Bowtothequeen]

Never once was I condecending or accusing you of being rude. Near the bottom of page one you said you were going to write a story, too. I offered genuine advice. On this literary web site, the owners will deny your story if you wrote in the same fashion.

It's not my fault you went off.

But,m'am i don't write storied,nor am i saying that i'm a good at writing,or have any skill at it whatsoever or as i said would comment ever on the writing or others. And if you felt i went off on you,i am sorry,i never meant to. If it was advice you were giving, thank you

 

[Bowtothequeen]

Never once was I condecending or accusing you of being rude. Near the bottom of page one you said you were going to write a story, too. I offered genuine advice. On this literary web site, the owners will deny your story if you wrote in the same fashion.

It's not my fault you went off.

And the story..is not a story really,just another person suggested that i write a how to on lesbian sex,that would be posted here on the board not in the storry section. Well if i think i managed to write it in a useful way i'll post it.

 

[MyRubiLips]

And the story..is not a story really,just another person suggested that i write a how to on lesbian sex,that would be posted here on the board not in the storry section. Well if i think i managed to write it in a useful way i'll post it.

But you're not allowed to post stories (including How Tos) in the bulletin board; per site rules. (So I took their suggestion to mean an actual submission to the site where grammar and punctuation are needed.)

 

[Bowtothequeen]

But you're not allowed to post stories (including How Tos) in the bulletin board; per site rules. (So I took their suggestion to mean an actual submission to the site where grammar and punctuation are needed.)

Right...not on the bulletin board. Well then, i shall be very careful about grammar and punctuation.