My festering rage

WickedEve said:
Usually, their daddies come.

:D

:kiss:

Eve
You’re such a tantric temptress
Offer up your charms
With a tempting smile
A rapier wit
Heartless afterglow

Dagger digging for the heart
Doing it missionary
With a sultry smile
Pornographic eyes
Razor teeth
For rending

Casual Encounter
Meaningful in a way
Repeat as desired
Desire you
Deeply
As I can get it

Wasted words
Interrupted by the taste
Blood dripping from my chin
Tongue-less, Lipless, Mute
With need
For you
 
The_Fool said:
Dagger digging for the heart
Doing it missionary
With a sultry smile
Pornographic eyes
Razor teeth
For rending
Yes, that's me. :)
You were very bad Monday night. I want you to know that. Now, if you're curious enough, you'll PM me.
 
grungalunga said:
Just being honest - Im talking mainly about the crazy ones you see on tv that speak really fast in a rhythm - the kinds youd see in coffee houses dressed in black talking about how his feces is a symbol for society, who instead of clapping do that snapping horse-shit. The kinds who think that Cristo's orange sheets were real art.
I think you should write a poem about them. :)

Christo is a clown. But he's also a marketing genius.
 
Let me say ...hehehe keep writing,
you made it through the first wave of the gauntlet <grin>
endour!

paints a picture ~
lit-ville human walks the web rode
turns down poem street, say's
"this is neat," "Others say and I say"
little poem people with great big mallets
scampering about 'new guy new guy'
smash smash smash lookin fo feet~ <chuckleboned>

take your right hand (given your right handed)
put it on your left arm
and pinch ... is your skin thin ...don't begin <grinin'>
 
grungalunga said:
i think my poem made me sound insane. (if that one doesnt, wait until i post my next one) - I just threw my thoughts on paper. Like im doing a report or whatnot. Then I convert it into a poem somehow, in structure, theme, or rhyme scheme.

Thats what i did for the first one, thats what i'll prob do for the next one (assuming i do one)
Hmmm, never bothered me none
Hmmm, some may calls it a rhyme scheme, but if you forces the words, I calls it crap
Hmmm, I likes this, says what it has to say, I likes this whatnots, go fer it

(Note: new poet - repition,(hmmm) consisientcy of tone, AND doesn't make me sound smarter than I am, well... maybe just a little)
 
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