DRxBlue
Literotica Guru
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- Jan 31, 2002
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Hey there Chewey,
i'd like to echo what Rigged for Dive said way back at the beginning of this thread.
"I'm not sure which one he read" he was referring to your unknown negative feedbacker.
(can you nounize a word like that?)
i read "A Girl's Weekend Fun"
and "Kelly & the Last Delivery"
i thought they were both quite good
i suspect your unidentified critic is a frustrated lesbian in intense denial who just felt jealous!
i was jealous of the husband in "Weekend Fun"
it would be really nice to find a scene like that when i opened MY bedroom door (sigh)
What ever you do, keep up with the writing!
and READING helps a lot too!
Practice is the best teacher.
That's all doctors ever do.
Doctor Blue
i'd like to echo what Rigged for Dive said way back at the beginning of this thread.
"I'm not sure which one he read" he was referring to your unknown negative feedbacker.
(can you nounize a word like that?)
i read "A Girl's Weekend Fun"
and "Kelly & the Last Delivery"
i thought they were both quite good
i suspect your unidentified critic is a frustrated lesbian in intense denial who just felt jealous!
i was jealous of the husband in "Weekend Fun"
it would be really nice to find a scene like that when i opened MY bedroom door (sigh)
What ever you do, keep up with the writing!
and READING helps a lot too!
Practice is the best teacher.
That's all doctors ever do.
Doctor Blue
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