OOC: Muse for The Priest ~ CLOSED for Veroe & yeishia.
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“He was the son of this bitchy book reviewer. Totally blasted my first book. Called all my lovely kinksters ‘sick’ and ‘abusive.’ So I got my payback by sickly abusing her youngest all night long.”
“And you felt guilty about that?”
“Not the sex. The note I sent Mom the next day.”
“You sent his mother a note after you seduced her son? What did it say?”
“It said...” Nora began, and paused for a breath. Not one of her prouder moments. “It said, ‘Your son gave me five stars last night. And five fingers.’”
“You’re smiling.”
“I’m trying so hard to feel bad about it. I swear to God I am.”
“And you felt guilty about that?”
“Not the sex. The note I sent Mom the next day.”
“You sent his mother a note after you seduced her son? What did it say?”
“It said...” Nora began, and paused for a breath. Not one of her prouder moments. “It said, ‘Your son gave me five stars last night. And five fingers.’”
“You’re smiling.”
“I’m trying so hard to feel bad about it. I swear to God I am.”
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“Simple game—he’d fill a wineglass with one of his expensive reds and set it on the edge of the table. Then he would fuck me. Hard.” Nora grinned as Wesley flinched. “If I thrashed too much, or fought him and knocked the glass off…then the wine wasn’t the only red that we spilled that night.”
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This is defiantly helping Veroe , thank you I love the quotes,
Hard limit : Tattoos on my characterMight let Daemon carve his initials on her arse
That's an idea...maybe just a letter "D" in some fancy script...
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This reminds me of the game with the wine glass from one of the quotes above...maybe we could use that for the basis of a scene.
I thought the same thing.
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yeishia
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Someone is in the groove.
Love the direction all your posts are going.
I am inside her mind It took me a while...
I am happy you like the direction. I am trying to convey a very specific feeling its hard to put into words. It speaks to this I think....
"I thought that you were the most beautiful creature on Gods earth.
I would have been atheist but for you proving for me that both hell and heaven exist, even if they exist only when I am with you."
Some of our scenes will be very extreme. I want them to be more than...ummm...I want our reader to want to hide their eyes, but find that they are not able too for fear of not being a part of what becomes an almost spiritual experience. I want our reader to want to be in Jenny's place even if they do not have a masochistic bone in their body. If each scene is that acute it reconciles the duality of our priest. it speaks clearly that their connection goes way deeper than the scene would ordinarily imply. Not sure if I am making sense?
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That's beautiful, and a fantastic goal to keep in mind. I've started my reply so let's hope I can deliver on my end of that.
Wish for me that my muse can help summon Soren onto the page, ok.
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That's beautiful, and a fantastic goal to keep in mind. I've started my reply so let's hope I can deliver on my end of that.
Wish for me that my muse can help summon Soren onto the page, ok.
Your wish is my command...
Perhaps a little pain?
A little of this...
