SweetOblivion
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Dec 30, 2005
- Posts
- 165
Nice show
...but you need, as others have said, to do some considerable work on the telling.
Watch out for spelling, punctuation and, above all, make the story interesting, different and worth reading.
I wish you well in your continued efforts.
Smiles
Sweet O.
...but you need, as others have said, to do some considerable work on the telling.
Watch out for spelling, punctuation and, above all, make the story interesting, different and worth reading.
I wish you well in your continued efforts.
Smiles
Sweet O.
