Pissed off today?

[Elda Furry]

Decisions piss me off!

Must make up my mind
like the bed we tumbled in.

Decisions -
you're in my right hand,
he's in the left -
heavy decisions,
hard decisions.

Will answers cum from heads
like thick shafts
of light in my darkness?

 

[_Land]

Re: Decisions piss me off!

Must make up my mind
like the bed we tumbled in.

Decisions -
you're in my right hand,
he's in the left -
heavy decisions,
hard decisions.

Will answers cum from heads
like thick shafts
of light in my darkness?

Great Poem Elda


What if you cant decide
will you take them
take them both for a ride
One in front, One on the side
leading them on
through your pussy's glide
Treacherous moaning
as orgasm the escapade finds
who dear,will be groaning
Will it be Him, Or will it be Him?
Or will it be you
thats left on a whim?

 

[Senna Jawa]

Re: Feel the Love ermmm.........HATE

Thanks for the thread SP


Thick Hatred



The air Hangs thick
like a mississippi bog
no room to breath
no place to speak

silence, a cough, a stare
hatred oozes from your pores
the tension is to thick
it cant be cut

words stick in my throat
it is scortching
dry, cracked, parched
nothing comes out

choking on your hatred
gagging in silence
whoever said silence is golden
was lying through their teeth

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                bullets don't hurt me
                in my life-long bullet-proof vest

                only seeing the misdirecting smile
                or open anger
                and the finger squeezing and squeezing the trigger


wlodzimierz holsztynski &copy
    1995-10-26


Somehow this poem   [bullets...]   is pretty much neglected by Literotica audience (42 views since July 20). It got one vote 3. "Of course" I learned on Literotica to vote on my own poems, so that the scores don't offend my eyes too much. So. superficially it looks not too bad, average 4 . At first, when I came to Literotica, I wouldn't touch my submissions, I would not click on them, I didn't vote. Then I learned that my poems had a microscopic font, nearly impossible to read! Etc. BTW, I see that another 5 was unvoted away from another of my poems. Oh, poor poems, have to suffer No, Eve, it was not like there were many votes. Just the opposite. The poem had 3 votes (including my own), now it has two. There was no abuse, unless you call unvoting an abuse. It's fine with me actually. I just pity that poor person.

Regards,

 

[_Land]

Re: Re: Feel the Love ermmm.........HATE

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                bullets don't hurt me
                in my life-long bullet-proof vest

                only seeing the misdirecting smile
                or open anger
                and the finger squeezing and squeezing the trigger


wlodzimierz holsztynski &copy
    1995-10-26


I dont know why more people dont vote, I vote on every poem I read, I think its a courtesy........ I like the poem Senna, Since we are on the subject of bullet proof................................

Not So Supermans Theme Song
by _Land ©
a silent tear
an ode to the pain
that I cant show her
I'm the Man
I can not be wounded
I can not show Fear

blood slowly trickles
from the punture she made
I smile, I pretend
That I can not be hurt
I'm Immortal
I'm Superman
I grin as she twists the blade

I'm a man at his best
I will pass this test
Even if I'm dying inside

 

[Senna Jawa]

Re: Re: Re: Feel the Love ermmm.........HATE

Not So Supermans Theme Song
by _Land ©

a silent tear
an ode to the pain
that I cant show her
I'm the Man
I can not be wounded
I can not show Fear

blood slowly trickles
from the punture she made
I smile, I pretend
That I can not be hurt
I'm Immortal
I'm Superman
I grin as she twists the blade

I'm a man at his best
I will pass this test
Even if I'm dying inside

        * * *


                when I love down the drain
                I'll be a poet
                again

                ... and a philosopher when alone -
                you're already hurting me
                and you know it

                when moonlit nights drive me insane
                I'll sing
                you're hurting me again
                and I wink



Wlodzimierz Holsztynski
    1991-06-22



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                gargle



                        the light finds its way
                        to blind me
                        oh lady put that blade
                        down

                        you drive across my eyes
                        lay with me side by side
                        leave that blade aside

                        another ray
                        has caught my eye afire
                        three times a lady
                        one time a psycho
                        has a chilling affect
                        on my desire
                        oh blah blah blah



wlodzimierz holsztynski
1991-12-24/25




Regards,

 

[_Land]

Re: Re: Re: Re: Feel the Love ermmm.........HATE

        * * *


                when I love down the drain
                I'll be a poet
                again

                ... and a philosopher when alone -
                you're already hurting me
                and you know it

                when moonlit nights drive me insane
                I'll sing
                you're hurting me again
                and I wink



Wlodzimierz Holsztynski
    1991-06-22






====================




                gargle



                        the light finds its way
                        to blind me
                        oh lady put that blade
                        down

                        you drive across my eyes
                        lay with me side by side
                        leave that blade aside

                        another ray
                        has caught my eye afire
                        three times a lady
                        one time a psycho
                        has a chilling affect
                        on my desire
                        oh blah blah blah



wlodzimierz holsztynski
1991-12-24/25




Regards,

I really Like both of those Senna,



Anguish
by _Land ©
What is wrong with me?


Words dont touch the pain that I feel
My mind, Heart, and Soul are numb
The emotions out of control, sending impulses
Raging through my conscience

Why is it always my fault
Why cant I get it right
"PERFECT" according to You
I am a total failure
There is No hope
Thoughts repeated again

The lonliness has never left
It has always been
Companionship lost?
It was never found
The mantis kills her mate
I to am dead

Everything I ever felt or did
Declared a lie, a story, a coverup
Efforts made in vain for not
What is Love? Is it Real?
Imagined like a dream

Is there someone out there?
Who could love me for who I am?
Not hate me for who I'm not?

 

[_Land]

Whooooo

Whooooo Whooooo Whooooo
Am I cried the owl in my head
Identity crisis, Whooooo
No mans land staring back in the mirror
Blank expression, from lifeless eyes
Seeing clearer in the void of night
Whooooo Whooooo Whooooo
Am I cried the owl in my head
Identity crisis, Whooooo